Phyllis Babcock Poet Personification

Undressing Autumn

The wind gently touched the colored leaves
Shaking them ever so gently and watched
As they glided gently downward to the ground
Soft and colorful not yet crisp from the
ever changing season's cold
Soon the trees will be barren 
The green dress of summer changed
to autumn's splendid colorful suit
The wind smiled for it will have fun
undressing and blowing autumn's leaves.

9/17/13

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Poet Destroyer A November 27, 2013 at 12:07 AM Phyllis, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

Debbie Duncan October 25, 2013 at 9:56 PM This is very nice Phyllis ;}

Lucilla Carrillo September 30, 2013 at 9:52 PM I liked this very much. I also love to see the naked trees. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Debbie Guzzi September 25, 2013 at 5:50 PM so true Phyl, I hope you are fine and had a great summer and now a fine Fall. Light & Love

Nette Onclaud September 24, 2013 at 11:03 AM how this enchants me so, phyl... your autumnal grace just flows.. so lovely!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2013 at 12:14 AM PHyllis, thanks for seeing so many of my poems today. I sure wish you had lots of new ones for me to see. I need to spend the wee morning hours doing lesson plans. But wanted to tell you what a great friend you are. Luv, Andrea

Jack Horne September 22, 2013 at 4:29 PM love this imaginative write, Phyll. Hope you are feeling well and having a great weekend x

Andrea Dietrich September 21, 2013 at 1:23 AM very pretty personification, my friend. It's always a delight coming here and seeing you have read my poems and better when I see you have up a new post. Now you have to do Gails' contest on season's dance. I bet you can do a great one.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2013 at 4:04 PM - Phyllis, thanks for the reminder :)) .... I am still "summer Turkey" ..... But, I know that autumn is waiting for me at home in Norway - Always nice to read what you write - Well done. - All the best to you my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 18, 2013 at 12:21 AM Nice personification of autumn, many sees it but few like you can pen it, Phyllis