Home » Poems » Phyllis Babcock » Undressing Autumn

Undressing Autumn

The wind gently touched the colored leaves Shaking them ever so gently and watched As they glided gently downward to the ground Soft and colorful not yet crisp from the ever changing season's cold Soon the trees will be barren The green dress of summer changed to autumn's splendid colorful suit The wind smiled for it will have fun undressing and blowing autumn's leaves. 9/17/13

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/27/2013 12:07:00 AM

Phyllis, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

Debbie Duncan

Date: 10/25/2013 9:56:00 PM

This is very nice Phyllis ;}

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/30/2013 9:52:00 PM

I liked this very much. I also love to see the naked trees. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/25/2013 5:50:00 PM

so true Phyl, I hope you are fine and had a great summer and now a fine Fall. Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/24/2013 11:03:00 AM

how this enchants me so, phyl... your autumnal grace just flows.. so lovely!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2013 12:14:00 AM

PHyllis, thanks for seeing so many of my poems today. I sure wish you had lots of new ones for me to see. I need to spend the wee morning hours doing lesson plans. But wanted to tell you what a great friend you are. Luv, Andrea

Jack Horne

Date: 9/22/2013 4:29:00 PM

love this imaginative write, Phyll. Hope you are feeling well and having a great weekend x

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/21/2013 2:16:00 PM

soon your weather will be ours as your northern winds blow. our trees still enjoy showers. but every now and then there is a chill.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2013 1:23:00 AM

very pretty personification, my friend. It's always a delight coming here and seeing you have read my poems and better when I see you have up a new post. Now you have to do Gails' contest on season's dance. I bet you can do a great one.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2013 4:04:00 PM

- Phyllis, thanks for the reminder :)) .... I am still "summer Turkey" ..... But, I know that autumn is waiting for me at home in Norway - Always nice to read what you write - Well done. - All the best to you my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/18/2013 12:21:00 AM

Nice personification of autumn, many sees it but few like you can pen it, Phyllis