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Undress the Poem

Undress the poem Rhythm and rhyme fall away Beauty at my feet

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Date: 2/20/2017 11:49:00 AM
A beautiful seven :) I am seduced!
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John Herlihy
Date: 2/20/2017 11:51:00 AM
Ha, Ha, amusing comment. Thanks, Maureen. John
Date: 2/20/2017 6:02:00 AM
Hah! That's beautiful wordplay! Question here: is rhyme and rhythm the beauty, or the stripped poem.....?
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Darren White
Date: 2/20/2017 10:15:00 AM
Ambiguity, ambiguity.... sigh Darren :)
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Darren White
Date: 2/20/2017 8:26:00 AM
It was a rhetorical question John :) I love the ambiguousness of that last line.
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John Herlihy
Date: 2/20/2017 8:22:00 AM
you'll have to figure that one out for yourself. With haikus, there's limited room to explanation. Volumes lies in what is left unsaid. John