Undress the Poem

Undress the poem

Rhythm and rhyme fall away

Beauty at my feet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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February 20, 2017 at 11:49 AM
A beautiful seven :) I am seduced!
Herlihy Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Ha, Ha, amusing comment. Thanks, Maureen. John
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February 20, 2017 at 6:02 AM
Hah! That's beautiful wordplay! Question here: is rhyme and rhythm the beauty, or the stripped poem.....?
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February 20, 2017 at 10:15 AM
Ambiguity, ambiguity.... sigh Darren :)
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February 20, 2017 at 8:26 AM
It was a rhetorical question John :) I love the ambiguousness of that last line.
Herlihy Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 8:22 AM
you'll have to figure that one out for yourself. With haikus, there's limited room to explanation. Volumes lies in what is left unsaid. John
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