Eileen Manassian Poet Free verse

Undress Me

Before you undress
My outer garments
Undress my soul
Gently lay aside the coverings
That hide my private dreams
Lay bare my intimate thoughts
With the most gentlest of care
Undress my inner woman
Lay aside that final wispy layer
Shielding my innermost, deepest need
Lay naked my trembling heart

Only then can your fingers
Undo every dainty button 
Down the length of my dress
Let my covering fabric of your desire
Fall to the ground at my feet
Revealing the full womanly form
You have already explored intimately
In your mind….

In the silence of these moments
With the streaming moonlight, a waiting robe
Undress Me

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Paul Callus April 2, 2021 at 6:36 AM It is always a pleasure to delve into the chest of your earlier poems, Eileen. This one has your unmistakable trademark stamped on it...you know well how a man's mind works!! Love & Hugs // paul

Painted Hunter December 3, 2013 at 10:46 AM Whew!...Steamy and with a depth that doesn't usually come with this kind of sensual piece. Great!! How are you, Eileen? Eileen Manassian December 3, 2013 at 10:48 AM I JUST posted on your work, Caleb. BOY......you are a NAUGHTY BOY! Where you been hiding!!! I have missed you! :) Thanks for the visit......You know me.......steamy does it! HA HA!

Chris Boskovski December 2, 2013 at 11:35 PM this is a very intense poem you wrote and I enjoyed it very well! great write Eileen! :) xoxoxo hugs and kisses all around! Eileen Manassian December 3, 2013 at 10:49 AM Thanks, Chris......Glad you've decided to visit my work again. Makes me happy! :) Hugs!!!

Donna Jones December 2, 2013 at 9:15 PM Ahh yes look and see what's deep inside...the rest follows!!!!..so sweet sweetie...love ya MD Eileen Manassian December 3, 2013 at 10:51 AM LOVE YOU, MD. YOU ARE SWEET!!!! HUGS HUGS HUGS!

David Fisher December 2, 2013 at 4:01 PM A 'shallow Hal' would be stopped in his tracks here...too bad for him, because to love is...to LOVE! Nicely done. Eileen Manassian December 3, 2013 at 10:53 AM Thanks, David. Very interesting comment here. I thoroughly enjoyed the visit! :)

Poet Tacito December 2, 2013 at 10:00 AM I know the robe, itself, is in its glory. =) Your Eros-style verbiage speaks with such a bold and accentuated dialect. The body, no limitations...excellent message. Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 11:14 AM Thanks, Drake.........Yes.......the actual act in itself is profound if it is preluded by the intercourse of minds....What most men forget.....A woman gives....and gives......when she knows she's cherished and loved. Then........the act itself has no limits or boundaries. Thanks for the post. :)

Arthur Vaso December 1, 2013 at 10:32 PM a very erotic sou! I loved this one!!!! Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 11:16 AM Hmmmmmmmm.......I wonder at the word erotic here, Arthur. Very interesting adjective. It dumbfounds me. Yes....I guess there were some hidden messages there.....that could lead to another dimension.....Yes, that was my purpose! ;) Thanks for the post.

Joseph Sergi December 1, 2013 at 8:29 PM from the soul a very moving poem Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 11:18 AM :) Thanks, Joseph. Kind of you.......

Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2013 at 3:47 PM - Woooow ..... Eileen so beautiful and romantic ..... (I blush just by reading the title :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)) Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 11:19 AM ;) You are a sweet sensitive soul, my dear. Blush away.....It becomes you. HUGS

Ken Carroll December 1, 2013 at 3:04 PM Hi Eileen, A moving sensual write.. Ken Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 11:17 AM Sensual.......I like that adjective. It was intended to be so I guess I reached my purpose. Thank you every so much Ken.

Honestly J.T. December 1, 2013 at 2:52 PM ~Soup Mail~ Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 11:20 AM Back at ya! ;)

Delysia Hendricks December 1, 2013 at 1:02 PM Geez, girlfriend, how much deeper can you go with your poetry? An exceptional write from an exceptional woman and poetess. I'm impressed no end. Big, warm hugs, my friend. Licia XOXOXOX Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 11:22 AM Oh honey.....you have no clue. However, having said that.......I do believe that my poetry does not go as DEEP as some, my dear. I truly believe that....Were I to BARE ALL.....this would sizzle off your computer screen......... ;) I wrote a two part short story yesterday, and the last line of part II was the title of this poem. I got inspired.......what can I say? Now THAT I will leave a mystery...... Delysia Hendricks December 1, 2013 at 1:04 PM PS - Please don't allow all to be bared. Keep some parts out of bounds to keep the mystery alive (wink, wink). XOXOXOXOX

Chuck Melugin December 1, 2013 at 12:40 PM When the inner woman speaks, love listens! You wrote your soul!! Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 11:23 AM :) Thanks ever so much, Chuck. This post of yours is beautiful and poetic. :)

Johnny Rhinem December 1, 2013 at 12:18 PM Ps., Just Another Beautiful Favourite, By A Most Gifted As, Beautiful Bard ˜ Happy Holidays Precious Eileen And, Someone Is Extremely Blessed, To Hold Your Love. Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 11:24 AM Beautiful Bard........lovely use of alliteration. I'm touched! :) Thank you for your visit, Johnny. Have a great holiday!

Johnny Rhinem December 1, 2013 at 12:11 PM † Yes, Indeed ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, John Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 11:25 AM :) Indeed, my thanks to you for this kind post.

Honestly J.T. December 1, 2013 at 11:59 AM You lay bare your own soul just by the way you write poetry. Awesome poem Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 11:29 AM Yes, I do. Justice, it's my therapy...I live in a very conservative community in many ways.......This is my outlet. My way of expressing things I may not be able to share. Yet, even here...I feel at times I'm considered over the top...I've decided to be true to myself, and not care. Thanks for this kind comment. It cheers my heart.

Richard Lamoureux December 1, 2013 at 11:07 AM Small typo you to your, first line second stanza. Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 11:52 AM Thanks, Richard.........for always having my back! ;)

Richard Lamoureux December 1, 2013 at 11:06 AM Stunning piece as is your inner woman. You are truly a exceptional woman and poet. I hope he undresses you with great care. You are a gift to be cherished. Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 11:57 AM Richard......I don't know how to express how I feel about this post. I will treasure it. It gives me such a boost of confidence. I need that. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Dr.Ram Mehta December 1, 2013 at 6:21 AM Deep thoughtful romantic expressions, Eileen Eileen Manassian December 2, 2013 at 12:00 PM Thank you for your visit, Dr Ram.