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Undress Me

Before you undress My outer garments Undress my soul Gently lay aside the coverings That hide my private dreams Lay bare my intimate thoughts With the most gentlest of care Undress my inner woman Lay aside that final wispy layer Shielding my innermost, deepest need Lay naked my trembling heart Only then can your fingers Undo every dainty button Down the length of my dress Let my covering fabric of your desire Fall to the ground at my feet Revealing the full womanly form You have already explored intimately In your mind…. In the silence of these moments With the streaming moonlight, a waiting robe Undress Me Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/2/2021 6:36:00 AM

It is always a pleasure to delve into the chest of your earlier poems, Eileen. This one has your unmistakable trademark stamped on it...you know well how a man's mind works!! Love & Hugs // paul

Painted Hunter

Date: 12/3/2013 10:46:00 AM

Whew!...Steamy and with a depth that doesn't usually come with this kind of sensual piece. Great!! How are you, Eileen?

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/3/2013 10:48:00 AM

I JUST posted on your work, Caleb. BOY......you are a NAUGHTY BOY! Where you been hiding!!! I have missed you! :) Thanks for the visit......You know me.......steamy does it! HA HA!

Chris Boskovski

Date: 12/2/2013 11:35:00 PM

this is a very intense poem you wrote and I enjoyed it very well! great write Eileen! :) xoxoxo hugs and kisses all around!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/3/2013 10:49:00 AM

Thanks, Chris......Glad you've decided to visit my work again. Makes me happy! :) Hugs!!!

Donna Jones

Date: 12/2/2013 9:15:00 PM

Ahh yes look and see what's deep inside...the rest follows!!!!..so sweet sweetie...love ya MD

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/3/2013 10:51:00 AM

LOVE YOU, MD. YOU ARE SWEET!!!! HUGS HUGS HUGS!

David Fisher

Date: 12/2/2013 4:01:00 PM

A 'shallow Hal' would be stopped in his tracks here...too bad for him, because to love is...to LOVE! Nicely done.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/3/2013 10:53:00 AM

Thanks, David. Very interesting comment here. I thoroughly enjoyed the visit! :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/2/2013 10:00:00 AM

I know the robe, itself, is in its glory. =) Your Eros-style verbiage speaks with such a bold and accentuated dialect. The body, no limitations...excellent message.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 11:14:00 AM

Thanks, Drake.........Yes.......the actual act in itself is profound if it is preluded by the intercourse of minds....What most men forget.....A woman gives....and gives......when she knows she's cherished and loved. Then........the act itself has no limits or boundaries. Thanks for the post. :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/1/2013 10:32:00 PM

a very erotic sou! I loved this one!!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 11:16:00 AM

Hmmmmmmmm.......I wonder at the word erotic here, Arthur. Very interesting adjective. It dumbfounds me. Yes....I guess there were some hidden messages there.....that could lead to another dimension.....Yes, that was my purpose! ;) Thanks for the post.

Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/1/2013 8:29:00 PM

from the soul a very moving poem

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 11:18:00 AM

:) Thanks, Joseph. Kind of you.......

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/1/2013 3:47:00 PM

- Woooow ..... Eileen so beautiful and romantic ..... (I blush just by reading the title :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :))

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 11:19:00 AM

;) You are a sweet sensitive soul, my dear. Blush away.....It becomes you. HUGS

Ken Carroll

Date: 12/1/2013 3:04:00 PM

Hi Eileen, A moving sensual write.. Ken

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 11:17:00 AM

Sensual.......I like that adjective. It was intended to be so I guess I reached my purpose. Thank you every so much Ken.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 12/1/2013 2:52:00 PM

~Soup Mail~

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 11:20:00 AM

Back at ya! ;)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 12/1/2013 1:02:00 PM

Geez, girlfriend, how much deeper can you go with your poetry? An exceptional write from an exceptional woman and poetess. I'm impressed no end. Big, warm hugs, my friend. Licia XOXOXOX

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 11:22:00 AM

Oh honey.....you have no clue. However, having said that.......I do believe that my poetry does not go as DEEP as some, my dear. I truly believe that....Were I to BARE ALL.....this would sizzle off your computer screen......... ;) I wrote a two part short story yesterday, and the last line of part II was the title of this poem. I got inspired.......what can I say? Now THAT I will leave a mystery......

Delysia Hendricks
Date: 12/1/2013 1:04:00 PM

PS - Please don't allow all to be bared. Keep some parts out of bounds to keep the mystery alive (wink, wink). XOXOXOXOX

Chuck Melugin

Date: 12/1/2013 12:40:00 PM

When the inner woman speaks, love listens! You wrote your soul!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 11:23:00 AM

:) Thanks ever so much, Chuck. This post of yours is beautiful and poetic. :)

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 12/1/2013 12:18:00 PM

Ps., Just Another Beautiful Favourite, By A Most Gifted As, Beautiful Bard ˜ Happy Holidays Precious Eileen And, Someone Is Extremely Blessed, To Hold Your Love.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 11:24:00 AM

Beautiful Bard........lovely use of alliteration. I'm touched! :) Thank you for your visit, Johnny. Have a great holiday!

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 12/1/2013 12:11:00 PM

† Yes, Indeed ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, John

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 11:25:00 AM

:) Indeed, my thanks to you for this kind post.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 12/1/2013 11:59:00 AM

You lay bare your own soul just by the way you write poetry. Awesome poem

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 11:29:00 AM

Yes, I do. Justice, it's my therapy...I live in a very conservative community in many ways.......This is my outlet. My way of expressing things I may not be able to share. Yet, even here...I feel at times I'm considered over the top...I've decided to be true to myself, and not care. Thanks for this kind comment. It cheers my heart.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/1/2013 11:07:00 AM

Small typo you to your, first line second stanza.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 11:52:00 AM

Thanks, Richard.........for always having my back! ;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/1/2013 11:06:00 AM

Stunning piece as is your inner woman. You are truly a exceptional woman and poet. I hope he undresses you with great care. You are a gift to be cherished.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 11:57:00 AM

Richard......I don't know how to express how I feel about this post. I will treasure it. It gives me such a boost of confidence. I need that. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/1/2013 6:21:00 AM

Deep thoughtful romantic expressions, Eileen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 12:00:00 PM

Thank you for your visit, Dr Ram.