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Undone

Along the flume, my ghosts coalesce; Feeding the soul of another lover; Little does she know, forever was never my intent; As certain as the days grow cold, and the autumn harvest thins, the drumming within my chest will slow and one day cease; There is nothing to be undone until my final breath has passed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/14/2015 11:20:00 PM
Hi Jacob, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/14/2015 11:38:00 AM
Jacob, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Jacob Welch
Date: 12/14/2015 1:25:00 PM
Thanks for the welcome, feel free to add me on facebook: https://www.facebook.com/jacobmichaelpeter.welch You can find my published works and some of my visual arts here: http://www.jacobmichaelpeterwelch.com Nice to meet you.

Book: Shattered Sighs