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Undone

Do you know i've written a lot, Some stories and poem, Some sad and happy, But most are undone, Like every love story, of everyone in agony, Like every pain of every left behind, They are mostly undone, Like every life being wished to end, Or every sleep disturbed by nightmares, Like every words I would have told him, Most of them are undone,

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Date: 10/12/2020 12:33:00 AM
I understand the poem dear Dona. If seem we leave undone things and we remember them on quiet nights. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
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Dona Salapar
Date: 11/9/2020 2:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for your words, it gives me courage to keep writing.
Date: 10/8/2020 7:57:00 AM
This is what happens when someone hurts us... a deeply emotive poem..
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Dona Salapar
Date: 11/9/2020 2:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for your words, it gives me courage to write more.

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