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Undoing the Disarmament of Venus de Milo: Aphrodite Gets Her Biceps Back

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Wordmorph going from tombs > woken. Best read with a standard resolution monitor, or in landscape mode on mobile. 
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Tombs begin to bloom like raw, bloodless wounds. Tomes are written with truths of her dead moon’s tones. A keening lunacy keeps the dirges alive, while bones rise out of repose. A degloved hand on the dial hones into a night rainbow's radio, she runs on solar, hopes for the rhythm to wrench free from her toller— copes with the captivity of being bodiless hands. Twilight comes to chance escape—open palms toward birthright. Coves burst into flame; a hungry fire wants holier water. Coven circles, recovers the skinless limbs of their daughter. Woven like song, sirens' balm to restore coats of missing arms, women are spells read correctly, using words as our alarms, woken to language, resurrecting ancient pairs of sacred charms.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 12/24/2024 8:52:00 AM
How clever this, although I can't imagine her with arms. The broken pieces of her arms sadly tossed away. Last stanza or the entire poem, i think should be bronzed into a plaque and kept 'neath her. Congratulations on your win! Faving :):)
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Date: 12/24/2024 3:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K
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Date: 12/23/2024 5:54:00 PM
Great job! It is a fun form to write! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/23/2024 10:18:00 AM
Wow amazing xo
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Date: 12/5/2024 11:18:00 PM
Ok ok I was a little distracted by the biceps... and I admit that even with a cheat sheet it's taken me 20 whole minutes to spot this is your word morph entry. This is insane, you know that right!? You've dismantled the universe, fixed the tilts, created medicine for stars so they no longer die. I didn't know what batting out of the park meant until setting it in the context of this contest entry. Nice poem - enjoyed (<-- evidence of the shock I'm in)
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Date: 12/11/2024 8:57:00 PM
I've decided you're the only one who gets me thus far. Tbh, it's enough :*
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Date: 12/6/2024 9:36:00 PM
If only I possessed the power and agency you believe of me, I could undo all the ails of the world and we'd be utopian living in no time. I'm happy to keep plugging away at this goal but know that I'll need a steady supply of these Bronte sister level comments to keep me going.
Date: 12/5/2024 10:49:00 PM
Bizarrely I think you're the only person in the world I haven't mentioned biceps to recently, so this seems a crazy coincidence (although I think we've correlated on an unusual word choice previously). Ok, I'm fixating on the bicep but if I zoom out I'm impressed. The title alone is award winning. Let's not put our bicep poems side by side for any reason - mine is kinda written in crayon lol
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