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Undesired Immortality of Vampires

Call it problematic or fortuitous my situation of continuous evolution created many difficult moments, finding food sources, young fresh blood, immortality started in fourteen sixty one seduced by feminine Beauty, initiated into dark duties of nocturnal predators, unable to end this undesirable existence, so many changes through endless years lifestyle, language, dress sense and diet, blood to vampires wasn't essential just desired especially fresh young sweet flavoured plasma, now in the twenty first century being a vampire though still undesirable there are easy pickings due to mankind's carefree attitude towards others, humans lack of decency is a vampires utopia. Composed on 30th September 2017. for contest form V- verse me a poem, Sponsored by Broken Wings.

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James Inman

Date: 10/6/2017 6:49:00 AM

An interesting story that is well written Roy.

Roy Pett
Date: 10/10/2017 12:30:00 PM

Thank you very much for your very kind comment James much appreciated. :))

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 10/4/2017 11:29:00 PM

Congratulations, Roy on your placement.

Roy Pett
Date: 10/5/2017 6:34:00 AM

Thank you very much Subimal much appreciated. :))

Constance La France

Date: 10/4/2017 6:21:00 PM

Roy, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent poem !

Roy Pett
Date: 10/5/2017 6:33:00 AM

Thank you so much for the opportunity and I am honoured that you thought this was good enough to be placed in your contest, very pleased. :)))

Jan Allison

Date: 10/2/2017 5:35:00 PM

Very dark deep and descriptive Roy I felt quite chilled reading your poem:-( Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett
Date: 10/2/2017 6:07:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan, I quite liked writing this made a change, thanks again for your support. :)

Barry Stebbings

Date: 10/2/2017 3:53:00 AM

Interesting poem, Roy, like the last stanza. Well penned. // Barry

Roy Pett
Date: 10/2/2017 4:33:00 AM

Thank you very much Barry, inspired by the contest, thanks again for your support. :))

Darren White

Date: 10/1/2017 1:01:00 PM

Wonderful poem Roy, and a scary picture to go with it. Dark, deep and daring. Good luck in the contest!

Roy Pett
Date: 10/2/2017 4:27:00 AM

Thank you very much Darren, not used to writing unrhymed verse so not sure if I've got it right, thanks again for your support. :))

Sanket Jain

Date: 10/1/2017 12:09:00 AM

First of all thank you for your inspiration and love for my poems I am also looking forward for more reviews from your side on my poems You have chosen such a deadly topic but it is full of creativity and scary words I love this poem a lot I am looking forward for some more poems on love and nature. Surely enough, you have an innovative mind. But the topic I disliked the most. Sorry for that. But I would love to see more on love and nature from you.

Roy Pett
Date: 10/1/2017 4:42:00 AM

Thank you very much Sanket, I find your monorhymes very entertaining and well written, I wrote this for the contest not my usual style, I have and will visit your page, thanks again for your support. :))

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/30/2017 9:38:00 PM

A dark and awesome write Roy. Wonderful imagery. Beautiful lines but your last stanza especially is amazing. Good luck in the contest.

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/1/2017 9:15:00 AM

I think you wrote a great write that's for sure Roy. Your poem reads smoothly and rhythmically with lovely language as well.

Roy Pett
Date: 10/1/2017 4:38:00 AM

Thank you very much Susan, I am not certain about writing unrhymed verse as I usually write rhyme, I wrote this mainly for the contest, thanks again for your very kind comment and support. :))