Undeserved Bliss

early morning walks 
  through grassy slopes
    awaken deep in me 
      wonderful weird feelings
        of being lifted up, floating 
          high, joyfully buoyant

          as I slowly pick my way 
            down from breezy crests
              to softly murmuring creeks 
                'neath the foliage below,
                  of being loved by the sun 
                    and earth and sky, caressed,

                    of being so fortunate, 
                      so undeservedly 
                        blessed !
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August 27, 2011 at 11:43 AM
I see potential with more effort and personal touches.
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