Underwater Attraction Or Don'T Build Those Condos Just Yet.

Ponce DeLeon
kept pressing on
for the waters that made time stand still.
But he found no flow
and for all we know,
that fountain flows under a landfill.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dufresne Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 2:31 PM
This is funny. I like it. I believe that is the highest hill here in central south florida. I really don't think anybody would want a shot of that potion. Garbage squeezins? Thanks for sharing, Gerald
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 5:18 AM
Good morning Gerard. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 8:32 AM
Puts a smile on my face.....perhaps we still have a chance to find this magic potion? I could use a glass full soon!! lol !!
Kelly Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 6:49 AM
Much like a lot of Irish Developers , Gerard ; UNDREWATER !!! ; Needing a NAMA draining urgently !!!! ...
Jordan Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 10:08 PM
Gerard I enjoyed your poem it made me laugh - God Bless, MJ
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