Underwater

Everything is tinged with blue
I could stay here forever
Admiring the bubbles
The beauty
The feel of the water on my skin
I love being underwater
As soon as my head dips under the surface
All my cares dissolve
As if they are absorbed into the water
My hair floats around me
And to me, it looks better than it does on land
Did I mention I love being underwater?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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October 9, 2018 at 10:00 AM
I can feel this poem in my swimmers' heart. "all my cares dissolve as if they are absorbed into the water." Yes, this is what it is like.
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