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Underwater

Everything is tinged with blue I could stay here forever Admiring the bubbles The beauty The feel of the water on my skin I love being underwater As soon as my head dips under the surface All my cares dissolve As if they are absorbed into the water My hair floats around me And to me, it looks better than it does on land Did I mention I love being underwater?

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Date: 10/9/2018 10:00:00 AM
I can feel this poem in my swimmers' heart. "all my cares dissolve as if they are absorbed into the water." Yes, this is what it is like.
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