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Undertow

On the surface the water is nice, To step in and swim would cost you no price But when you step in, you feel a sharp pull It comes from the water that seemed gentle and cool The rippling liquid pulls you down under, Is everything how is appears? Its this that I wonder.....

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Date: 8/29/2018 9:14:00 PM
Well penned, mermaid girl.
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