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Underperforming

Yikes it's minus 15 degrees this morning Are we being punished, is this a dire warning For our warlike obsession Our constant aggression Methinks our species is misunderstanding

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Judith S

Date: 12/31/2017 8:29:00 AM

Stay warm my Canadian friend!!! Spring is just around the bend :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/31/2017 8:51:00 AM

Hey sweet thing... early this morning YEAH!!! Yup just a couple more months!!! An optimist??? YUP

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/31/2017 8:08:00 AM

You know what it's like over here//So I won't say or I fear//I'd hear you cuss//and make a fuss//maybe even shed a tear. PUT ON YOUR STEAM HEATED CAMISOLE BEFORE YOU FREEZE YOUR IMPORTANT PARTS JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/31/2017 8:12:00 AM

ALL my parts are important!!! Coldest December in memory... brrrrrrr!!! GOOD MORNNG JOHN JOHN!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/31/2017 7:57:00 AM

Stay indoors and keep writing your poetry Jack - I've written a weather forecast poem i think its right up your street lol!:-) happy new year:-) hugs jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/31/2017 8:09:00 AM

Happy New Year dear sis!!! I will check out your weather forecast poem... lovesies, Bro xxx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/31/2017 7:48:00 AM

Cold snap... emphasis on snap, quick shut the door! A warm good morning dear Jackson xomo!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/31/2017 9:21:00 AM

Lol!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/31/2017 8:56:00 AM

Uh that as before my time though!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/31/2017 8:13:00 AM

I think maybe Christmas '93 or '94? I remember taking the Pontiac Firefly with no heat to visit the mate's ma and pa, a candle on the dashboard to keep the windshield clear melted the the plastic film in the glass!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/31/2017 7:51:00 AM

This December "cold" snap is extreme eh!!! Don't remember one this cold this early do you? xxx

Silent One

Date: 12/31/2017 7:07:00 AM

I would love it if you used plonker.. there used to be a show in England called only fools and horses, have you ever seen it? Really really funny... Del boy used to call Rodney a plonker all the time.. with a name like Rodney what do you expect lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/31/2017 7:19:00 AM

Must be a kooky British show eh!!!

Silent One

Date: 12/31/2017 6:53:00 AM

Full of boogers is his honka, freezing cold is his willy wonka! Used a hot water bottle, in his pants, broke the throttle, burnt his wee man, what a plonker!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/31/2017 7:02:00 AM

HA Plonker!!! May I use that in my next lim? Wait for it... what is your fee though???

Silent One

Date: 12/31/2017 6:45:00 AM

Damn that is cold... keep ya googlies warm... lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/31/2017 6:49:00 AM

Got em all wrapped but it causes a big lump in my pantaloons!!! lol