Jan might appreciate this "brief" poem :)
UNDERPACKING packed only one of a kind not expecting leaking nor quickening of rain no moist path of cottony softness his wife packed three six packs with stripes and flowers polka dots bikinis, briefs, and grandma-size I exaggerate, he brought two one to hang near the bathroom sink 6/13/2017
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