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Jan might appreciate this "brief" poem :)

UNDERPACKING packed only one of a kind not expecting leaking nor quickening of rain no moist path of cottony softness his wife packed three six packs with stripes and flowers polka dots bikinis, briefs, and grandma-size I exaggerate, he brought two one to hang near the bathroom sink 6/13/2017

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Date: 6/13/2017 7:34:00 PM
Funny... and truth to it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2017 7:45:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes!
Date: 6/13/2017 2:00:00 PM
Hehe, I always underpack too. Good thing my good wife watches out for me. This one hit home Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2017 7:45:00 PM
Thanks, Dean! :)
Date: 6/13/2017 1:12:00 PM
Very funny. Does your husband really do that?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2017 1:39:00 PM
LOL...total exaggeration of the facts. But I on the underhand always have plenty...lol!

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