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A dark blue midnight awning has its portrait, etched by a starlit silver lustrous galaxy, silhouette of black lace frilled clouds, in somber quietude adrift beneath a vibrant pearl, amber moon whose gleaming radiance bemused awhile, at the stark underbelly of flickering candles, that the urban nocturne spellbound revel in perchance, sleep pattern held captive by ethereal bliss, angelic dreams wrapped in opal tincture, what optic relishes await at early first light, a colourfast dawn unveils it’s bronze bespoke banner, heaven bound yellow flare insouciant whim, red orange burst sky a stirring presage, for wingspan flight of stone gray plume creature, natural world usher whose gold throat cadence, rouses wonderment among the persimmon trees, phasing into human yearning for awestruck omen, Kashmir bright velvet hue azimuth a scant gem, yet sapphire orb twinkles close or distant lure might embolden dull minds with ardent spark

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Date: 2/18/2024 7:57:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive lines penned in this one of a kind. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 2/11/2024 8:41:00 AM
Every line a celestial journey, a destination of evefall's matchless beauty. Bravo Howard! Your golden diamond pen flows from such an enormously gifted psyche. Hats off to you. A blessed Sunday afternoon to you and your family. ~
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Date: 2/6/2024 10:32:00 AM
The beauty and mystery of the night sky, and the way it captivates and inspires both nature and humanity and touches upon the impact of these celestial phenomena on both the natural world and human perception. You use rich and evocative language to create vivid imagery, such as "starlit silver lustrous galaxy" and "vibrant pearl, amber moon." It also includes literary devices such as personification ("urban nocturne spellbound revel") and metaphor (wingspan flight of stone gray plume creature).
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