Underneath

I imagine a dense network of tunnels;        
malleable, hollow tubes narrowing        
then swelling - breathing a complex        
language beyond my comprehension.              
  
The synchrony is beautiful        
and I long to understand it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 12:32 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 1:55 PM
VIOLET, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT -
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 11:35 AM
Wonderful, cheers Violet!
Callus Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 9:34 AM
lovely...to my heart's content! // paul
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