Written February 9. 2025
For: "Undergrowth with Two Figures by Van Gogh poetry contest
by Dilly Dally
edited and changed 4/23/2025
Two figures in a meadow of years crowns with lilacs are their memories moments of beauty but also tears Now, but ghosts, they amble silently Often they walked here in younger days in life, they journeyed, his hand with hers Searching for the sun in a grey malaise a summer rain couldn't wash their tears They like to stroll here 'neath pastel skies among leaves dappled with days they knew memories' sadness still finds their eyes and blossoms reflect each goodbye hue Ghosts of long ago often leave hints that are best seen under lapis skies, in shadows or midst lavender scents Perhaps this truth Vincent realized
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