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"Brake me down, solve me to death, been trying to be within me, please show within me, show me braking down, show me within burying  myself..."

By Daniel Stafford.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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April 25, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Intriguing...sounds as if you are asking for someone's opinion of yourself. Has a sense of "lets see if you can guess right" about it all...almost as if you are challenging some person or persons to see if they are as astute as they might like to think. Enjoyed the poem Daniel. Keep up the good work! Best regards. :) john
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May 17, 2021 at 4:49 AM
Thank you so much and more, I really appreciate In what you've said. Best regards to you too. Stay safe.
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