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Underground

"Brake me down, solve me to death, been trying to be within me, please show within me, show me braking down, show me within burying myself..." By Daniel Stafford.

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John Fleming

Date: 4/25/2021 9:33:00 AM

Intriguing...sounds as if you are asking for someone's opinion of yourself. Has a sense of "lets see if you can guess right" about it all...almost as if you are challenging some person or persons to see if they are as astute as they might like to think. Enjoyed the poem Daniel. Keep up the good work! Best regards. :) john

Daniel Stafford
Date: 5/17/2021 4:49:00 AM

Thank you so much and more, I really appreciate In what you've said. Best regards to you too. Stay safe.