Under Your Spell

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Bewitching... how you sashay in and out, of rooms, all the while... wielding your sexiness with Excalibur. how you run your fingertips down my cheeks. Your touch, soft and gentle; it feels like... satin on my skin how you smile with galaxies of stars in your eyes; something about those eyes! They keep me... trapped under your spell. how you laugh at all my jokes. Hit or miss, you laugh anyway just to make my day. Thank you very much indeed! how you tightly wrap your loving arms around me chest to chest so I'd hear... your heartbeats But most of all, I love how... you show me the true meaning of love each day; it couldn't be... more enriching! COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(10) any theme any form contest (Winner: Honorable Mention) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date written: 09/16/2020

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/17/2020 5:23:00 AM

Sincere congratulations for your win in Brian's contest, Sir Edward - wonderful work that was fittingly rewarded - love the imagery! Blessings and best wishes to you and yours, my friend! :o)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/17/2020 6:53:00 AM

Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and visit, Greg:-) Congrats on your win as well, my friend!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/16/2020 6:06:00 PM

Bewitching...especially the galaxy eyes!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/16/2020 9:26:00 PM

Thank you, Kim:-)