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Under Your Softness

under your softness my blooming magnolia~~ rain is imminent © kash poet ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Placement: 5th; (Nov.2012) Contest: Natural Sekcy Haiku Sponsor:SandyIvyy ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Seren Roberts

Date: 11/15/2012 2:26:00 PM

Congratulations Kashpoet ...Seren

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2012 7:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Len Gasun

Date: 11/15/2012 12:51:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Kash! hugs, LG

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/14/2012 2:51:00 PM

brilliant winner Kash, your words are touching....

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/14/2012 10:25:00 AM

where are you this time.. ring, ring!!..:) hugggs, kashi

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2012 5:25:00 PM

CONGRATS KASH ON A SUPER SEXY ILLUSIVE THOUGHT IN THIS SULTRY HAIKU WITH A GREAT BIG WIN TOO LUV,,

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2012 4:55:00 PM

I can't remember if first time I saw it, was on the winners list or not. But I failed to say CONGRATULATIONS, you deserved to win big with this one.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2012 1:52:00 PM

Kash, congratulations with your awesome sexy haiku... :-) pd

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/13/2012 12:36:00 PM

i haven't even commented on this charming write and it had already garnered a high spot, kashi... wow, congrats on your stunning win!..:) huggs

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 11/13/2012 12:19:00 PM

So tender and sweet.

Joseph May

Date: 11/13/2012 9:32:00 AM

very nice haiku Kash...congrats on a great win

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2012 8:40:00 AM

Great work..Congrats on your winning..I enjoyed reading this one for sure..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

Jennifer Spase

Date: 11/13/2012 8:11:00 AM

There is an artist and muscian in your poem. I hear sounds and see colorful vision. Little words create big image and one can feel alot in it.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 11/13/2012 8:05:00 AM

Very subtle and cute. Big Congrats !! Jag

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2012 1:33:00 AM

Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 11/12/2012 10:22:00 PM

Sexy haiku. TY, Sandy'

Jack Horne

Date: 11/12/2012 2:23:00 PM

beautiful sensual haiku, Kash

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2012 2:11:00 PM

Awesome, Kash, you took nature to the sensual extreme!! I am thinking my little joke in soup helped you come up with some of this? hahaha. One of the best of them all!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/12/2012 10:54:00 AM

You have written a magnificent piece here my friend! What beauty you have bestowed upon us! Great Work!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/12/2012 8:39:00 AM

A Haiku from the heart... Very nice my friend..Michael