Kash Poet Poet Haiku

Under Your Softness

under your softness
my blooming magnolia~~
rain is imminent




© kash poet
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Placement: 5th; (Nov.2012)

Contest:  Natural Sekcy Haiku

Sponsor:SandyIvyy


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Seren Roberts November 15, 2012 at 2:26 PM Congratulations Kashpoet ...Seren

Carol Sunshine Brown November 15, 2012 at 7:01 AM Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Len Gasun November 15, 2012 at 12:51 AM Belated congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Kash! hugs, LG

Harry Horsman November 14, 2012 at 2:51 PM brilliant winner Kash, your words are touching....

Nette Onclaud November 14, 2012 at 10:25 AM where are you this time.. ring, ring!!..:) hugggs, kashi

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 13, 2012 at 5:25 PM CONGRATS KASH ON A SUPER SEXY ILLUSIVE THOUGHT IN THIS SULTRY HAIKU WITH A GREAT BIG WIN TOO LUV,,

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2012 at 4:55 PM I can't remember if first time I saw it, was on the winners list or not. But I failed to say CONGRATULATIONS, you deserved to win big with this one.

Poet Destroyer A November 13, 2012 at 1:52 PM Kash, congratulations with your awesome sexy haiku... :-) pd

Nette Onclaud November 13, 2012 at 12:36 PM i haven't even commented on this charming write and it had already garnered a high spot, kashi... wow, congrats on your stunning win!..:) huggs

Vesna Kovrlija November 13, 2012 at 12:19 PM So tender and sweet.

Joseph May November 13, 2012 at 9:32 AM very nice haiku Kash...congrats on a great win

Sara Kendrick November 13, 2012 at 8:40 AM Great work..Congrats on your winning..I enjoyed reading this one for sure..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

Jennifer Spase November 13, 2012 at 8:11 AM There is an artist and muscian in your poem. I hear sounds and see colorful vision. Little words create big image and one can feel alot in it.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair November 13, 2012 at 8:05 AM Very subtle and cute. Big Congrats !! Jag

Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2012 at 1:33 AM Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sandy Ivy D November 12, 2012 at 10:22 PM Sexy haiku. TY, Sandy'

Jack Horne November 12, 2012 at 2:23 PM beautiful sensual haiku, Kash

Andrea Dietrich November 12, 2012 at 2:11 PM Awesome, Kash, you took nature to the sensual extreme!! I am thinking my little joke in soup helped you come up with some of this? hahaha. One of the best of them all!

Russell Sivey November 12, 2012 at 10:54 AM You have written a magnificent piece here my friend! What beauty you have bestowed upon us! Great Work!!

Michael J. Falotico November 12, 2012 at 8:39 AM A Haiku from the heart... Very nice my friend..Michael