Susan Ashley Poet Free verse

Under Your Influence

In a state of awareness
that transcends time and distance
I swaddled you in the folds of my being
feeling the pure bliss of being saturated in love

I poured my love out for you -
sweet dreams gifted in silvery streams
as I held your tender breath to my breast..

that you were beautifully oblivious 
only served to further enthrall my exalted emotions

and your innocent influence acted upon my destiny. 


Susan Ashley 
August 5, 2018

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Robert Lindley September 16, 2018 at 6:59 AM I am fortunate enough to be blessed to have found and read again this another one of your gleaming gems my dear friend! Brought tears to my eyes as I thought again of my own mother, her immense love and hard life she had to live.. A fav-- a glowing jewel too.. Susan Ashley September 17, 2018 at 2:38 PM Dear Robert, your tender comments move and inspire me.. thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me and for your return visit to read my poem.. There is nothing like a mother's love nor the sacrifices she is willing to make for her beloved children.. blessed are we, my wonderful friend, for us to have had such a mother.. Your heartfelt sentiments and the fav are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf August 20, 2018 at 12:45 PM Send this one to every nursery throughout the world, and let it serve as a reminder of what love for a baby should truly be. Beautifully written, Susan!! Best wishes, Gershon Susan Ashley August 21, 2018 at 12:57 PM Thank you for your endearing and inspiring comments, Gershon. Your lovely thoughts speak from your soul and touch my heart. I’m pleased you enjoyed my poem. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Jean Murray August 15, 2018 at 2:47 PM What can compare to a mother's love Susan? I have no idea. Susan Ashley August 15, 2018 at 8:23 PM Nor do I, Jean.. Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts and comments with me Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Richard Lamoureux August 13, 2018 at 8:36 AM A gorgeous tender write. Susan Ashley August 13, 2018 at 1:15 PM Thank you so much dear Richard for your precious comments. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Sussn

Demetrios Trifiatis August 13, 2018 at 5:49 AM This is a hymn to Mother's purest expression of love and devotion dear, Susan! Heavenly! Susan Ashley August 13, 2018 at 1:36 PM Dear Demetrios, your tender comments move and inspire me.. thank you for your prized and precious thoughts my wonderful friend.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Charles Messina August 12, 2018 at 8:02 AM How beautiful this is, Susan! Your talent is truly a gift. You describe a mother and child wonderful...and your words are such a pleasure to always read...Great write as always my dear friend...Warmest Wishes ~Charlie Susan Ashley August 13, 2018 at 1:33 PM Charlie, your presence here is always such a delight. Your precious comments inspire and move me and are held in my deepest appreciation.. Warmest wishes my wonderfully charming friend.. ~Susan

Chuck Melugin August 12, 2018 at 5:36 AM My Dear Susan.....And your love lives on...After all, that's the stuff you're made of! Susan Ashley August 13, 2018 at 1:21 PM My dear Chuck, your beautiful and inspiring comments lift me up to beyond heaven. Your precious thoughts are tenderly held in my truest appreciation. Warmest wishes my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Pashang Salehi August 11, 2018 at 5:45 PM Childhood is a short season... love them anyway... Susan Ashley August 13, 2018 at 1:28 PM Agreed, Pashang, time is not constant for me either.. Sadly, everyone's summer ends sooner or later and Winter's harrows are a part of life, I think, if one lives long enough.. Thank God for the strength of summer's memories.. Pashang Salehi August 12, 2018 at 2:29 AM Hi again, Time is not constant or at least is not constant for me... Summer never ended when I was young, not it is a different story... Susan Ashley August 11, 2018 at 10:28 PM Indeed, Pashang.. childhood is so short compared to the rest of an average lifespan but it's funny how childhood seems endless when you are a child.. Thank you for your meaningful comments, I delight in your visit.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Joseph May August 11, 2018 at 7:19 AM You capture the emotions of this precious moment so well Susan..Beautifully expressed Susan Ashley August 11, 2018 at 9:02 AM Thank you, Joseph. It’s so lovely to hear from you and I’m so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your wonderful comments. Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan

Lyric Man August 11, 2018 at 12:45 AM A man who can have his influence remain innocent while his breath is held to a woman’s breast is an incredible man indeed. Susan, your captivating write is beautiful with just the right amount sizzle!! Susan Ashley August 11, 2018 at 10:42 PM Thank you, Lyric, for the delight of your visit, it's as wonderful to hear from you as it is to read your beautiful poetry. Your lovely comments are held in my truest appreciation my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Charlie Smith August 10, 2018 at 1:37 PM Simply beautiful Susan, loved the last line... Susan Ashley August 11, 2018 at 10:39 PM Thank you, Charlie, for your beautiful comments and appreciation. Your visit id such a delight my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Vladislav Raven August 10, 2018 at 8:44 AM Hi Susan, these words, so wonderfully crafted do sing into the soul. Your poetic grace i can read over and over. A write of love that must go into my faves. Your emotion ever flows in excellent poetry. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX Susan Ashley August 11, 2018 at 10:38 PM Dear Mike, it's so wonderful to hear from you. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your shining comments and for the fave, you are so kind.. your appreciation of my poem is precious to me and held dear.. Warmest wishes, my esteemed and talented friend. ~Susan

Paul Callus August 9, 2018 at 5:22 PM Any mother reading this would be captivated by your words, intoxicated under your influence, Susan! Some phrases grab my attention more than others: "I swaddled you in the folds of my being" ... "the pure bliss of being saturated in love" ... " I held your tender breath to my breast" plus the end line. Definitely a magical moment in which the bonding between mother & child comes to the fore. a fave ~ Warm regards and hugs my friend. // paul Susan Ashley August 11, 2018 at 10:34 PM I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my poem, Paul, and your appreciation of this magical moment between mother and child further delights me as well. I am touched by your beautiful and insightful comments and your fave, thank you my wonderful friend for the joy you bring. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2018 at 2:01 PM what a beautiful description for this amazing experience that so many of us experience. Well done! Susan Ashley August 10, 2018 at 11:14 AM Thank you Andrea, for your lovely comments. I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem of such a special time and of such a precious gift.. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Mystic Rose Rose August 8, 2018 at 8:09 AM I love that magic line swaddled you in the fold of my being. such a brilliant line, Thanks for sharing Susan, Your poems are always excellent.. Susan Ashley August 10, 2018 at 11:36 AM Dear Pixie, it's as wonderful to hear from you as it is to read your beautiful poetry. Thank you for your wonderful comments and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my poem.. your appreciation is precious to me.. Warmest wishes, my lovely friend. ~Susan

Winged Warrior August 8, 2018 at 7:38 AM Ohh, baby...'as I held your tender breath to my breast'...goo-goo, gaga lol...on the other level...beautifully described my poetic friend...you know I wov you...love & babies...^WW^ Susan Ashley August 10, 2018 at 11:35 AM Lol! Silly you.. :)) Thank you, Winged Warrior, for your wonderful comments that always brighten my day and my heart. I appreciate you and wov you too my precious friend.. Warmest wishes, love and hugs :)) ~Suse

Eve Roper August 8, 2018 at 12:13 AM Beautiful articulate the love of a child... Susan Ashley August 8, 2018 at 8:08 PM Thank you Eve, for your lovely and insightful comments. I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem of such a precious gift.. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Arturo Michael August 6, 2018 at 12:38 PM The pure love of a mother's breast as she holds her life in her own hands...Lovely Susan...All the best Susan Ashley August 8, 2018 at 8:13 PM Thank you dear Arturo, your comments are so beautifully insightful. I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem of such a special time and such a precious gift.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Robert Lindley August 6, 2018 at 6:32 AM Under the great influence of love, miracles are performed as well as epic deeds that have advanced civilization. We think of the influence a parent has on a child, but oft the influence the child has on the parent is greater. This as always, is you writing truly wonderful poetry! A fav.. Susan Ashley August 10, 2018 at 11:28 AM Dear Robert, I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your insightful and glowing comments and for the fav.. I agree, my children have had a wonderful and positive influence on me on every lovely level and I love how I've grown and learned so much by being a mother. Your appreciation of my poem is precious to me and held close to my heart.. Warmest wishes, my esteemed and talented friend. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri August 6, 2018 at 4:48 AM Me too, dear Susan I have missed your gripping reads, your unique touch! You have your own way in captivating your avid reader's heart, mind and soul with your masterful choice of diction and your amazing craft in painting breathtaking images! The shape in which you present your work of beauty is impressive and unique! Always a great pleasure to read your amazing poetry dear Susan.. My sincere love. Susan Ashley August 10, 2018 at 11:22 AM Dear Besma, your uplifting and glowing presence touches my heart deeply and inspires me to reach for new heights. I'm so pleased to be able to captivate your loving heart, your insightful mind and your glorious soul with my poetry and I hold your precious thoughts, through your shining comments, in my truest appreciation close to my heart. Thank you for being an avid reader my dear and lovely friend. Warmest wishes and love always.. ~Susan

Tom Cunningham August 6, 2018 at 2:14 AM Beautiful verse Susan, a mother and baby meet for the first time , something only a mother can experience. Tom Susan Ashley August 8, 2018 at 8:07 PM Thank you Tom, for your beautiful and insightful comments. I'm pleased you enjoyed my verse of such a special time and such a precious gift.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Caren Krutsinger August 5, 2018 at 11:40 PM I immediately thought of a newborn baby with her mom, and the tender moments no one else can understand. What a beautifully glorious word poem, Susan. Susan Ashley August 8, 2018 at 8:02 PM Your beautiful and deeply insightful comments are held in my truest appreciation, Caren. I'm so pleased by your response to my poem and I thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Robertina B. August 5, 2018 at 11:15 PM So beautiful , dear friend.. Another masterpiece of yours.. Exquisite creativity !! I absolutely enjoy reading your work of art, dear friend.. Blessings! Susan Ashley August 8, 2018 at 8:01 PM Dear Robertina, it's as wonderful to hear from you as it is to read your beautiful poetry. Thank you for your wonderful comments and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my poem.. your appreciation is precious to me.. Warmest wishes, my lovely friend. ~Susan

Brandy Nicole August 5, 2018 at 11:13 PM Being wrapped around moments such as these- beautiful and romantic indeed. It's as if nothing else matters, time could be still, and love would still move. Your thoughts are breathtaking. ~ Brandy Susan Ashley August 7, 2018 at 10:49 AM Brandy, it's as wonderful to hear from you as it is to read your beautiful poetry. Thank you for your lustrous comments.. your appreciation of my poem is precious to me and your thoughts are beautiful.. Warmest wishes, my lovely friend. ~Susan

Anil Deo August 5, 2018 at 10:58 PM Beautiful ... stunning line by line slowly. Deliberately. As with the recall-ing as write-ing. As with ECCLESIASTES, i could easily see both natural love and Agape LOVE of God embracing the Beloved Child (us) shalom and Congrats. A few "WOWS" are in order. Susan Ashley August 7, 2018 at 10:47 AM Your beautiful, deeply insightful and enjoyable comments are held in my truest appreciation, Anil. I'm so pleased by your response to my poem and I thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

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