under your banner

                           ""
                         """"""
                     """"'"""""""""
              under your banner 
        my love loses all manner
 ...............of restraint...............

                           "" 
                           ""
                           ""  
                           ""
                 ""      ""             
                     ""
                                                      ||
                                                   
                                                     """
                                                    """""
                            """"""""""""""""it's like riding"""""""""""""""   
                                """""a boat in rough sailing""""" 
                                      ""through a calm sea"""
                          ::::::: °•°----""""""""""""""""""----°•°::::::
                        ::::::°•°:°•°----"":"""""":°•""::::::°•°:::::°
                          ~°~~~°~~~°"~""~"°~~°~~~~~°~
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Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 3:52 AM
Creative winning work. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
Daniels Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 12:52 PM
Beautiful illustration & lovely words, Maclawrence. Well done & Congrats, Sir.
Famuyiwa Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 3:55 PM
Many thanks, Ghairo.
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 10:14 AM
- You submitted two great haiku ... with great illustration, Maclawrence :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Famuyiwa Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 10:20 AM
Much appreciated Anne-Lise.
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 8:38 AM
Really nice. Love the message
Famuyiwa Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 8:51 AM
Thanks for your encouraging comment.
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