Under Thunder

alone I sit asunder
perplexed I surely wonder 
forgiving slightest blunder
why do we fear the thunder
when one can only ponder
on devastation‘s plunder



AP:  Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 10:22 PM
I like these monorhymes my friend!
Gauthier Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 3:13 AM
Thanks, Caren.
Adams Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 10:39 AM
Lovely write Line. I stear clear of storms whenever possible :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 11:40 AM
Good idea, Sandra. Thanks for not steering away from this one. LOL
Callus Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 7:48 AM
A lovely monorhyme, Line. It is good sometimes to question our own actions and reactions. Have a nice weekend. // paul
Gauthier Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 8:33 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Paul.
Michael Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 5:15 AM
Nice monorhyme...at first crack of thunder...no time to ponder...RUN
Gauthier Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 7:37 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Arturo. LOL
Somadas Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 11:59 PM
Nice monorhyme.. Alone.. That is why we fear...
Gauthier Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 12:14 AM
Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.
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