Under Thunder

alone I sit asunder
perplexed I surely wonder 
forgiving slightest blunder
why do we fear the thunder
when one can only ponder
on devastation‘s plunder



AP:  Honorable Mention 2020

Posted on February 21, 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 2/22/2020 10:22:00 PM
I like these monorhymes my friend!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/23/2020 3:13:00 AM
Thanks, Caren.
Date: 2/22/2020 10:39:00 AM
Lovely write Line. I stear clear of storms whenever possible :) hugs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/22/2020 11:40:00 AM
Good idea, Sandra. Thanks for not steering away from this one. LOL
Date: 2/22/2020 7:48:00 AM
A lovely monorhyme, Line. It is good sometimes to question our own actions and reactions. Have a nice weekend. // paul
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/22/2020 8:33:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Paul.
Date: 2/22/2020 5:15:00 AM
Nice monorhyme...at first crack of thunder...no time to ponder...RUN
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/22/2020 7:37:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Arturo. LOL
Date: 2/21/2020 11:59:00 PM
Nice monorhyme.. Alone.. That is why we fear...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/22/2020 12:14:00 AM
Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.
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