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Under the Weight of Words

The pedestal has crumbled I have fallen from great height Not the perfect kind of friend I can't seem to get it right My words have limitations My actions are misconstrued Can't give enough assurance I guess I'm a messed up dude So now I'm left to wonder Is there something wrong with me A friendship without conflict Is it just a fantasy Now I sit here and ponder How did it all go so wrong Perhaps it was an illusion All I wanted was to belong Each, chooses their direction One stays and the other goes Hurt by misunderstandings As both pain and sadness grows

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Anna Hopper

Date: 4/2/2015 8:13:00 AM

This reminds me of someone! She just might be your soulmate! Remember to let the little things roll off your shoulders in a friendship. Another excellent poem!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/2/2015 8:48:00 AM

Thanks Anna, I didn't know you knew my wife. I met her 22 years ago in April. Life is a much happier journey when you share it with your soul mate.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 3/21/2015 8:44:00 AM

It is sad when any friendship ends but it takes two to make it work and two to end it. As humans we make mistakes and we correct them or choose not to repeat them. All part of living.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/21/2015 9:05:00 AM

You speak the truth Monterey.

Mama Bear

Date: 3/17/2015 10:35:00 PM

No such thing as a perfect friendship but because we love them we learn to bend and hopefully our friend does too. We are blessed with people in our lives, some for a long time and some for a short time but everyone contributes to who we are. Thank God for the ability to love Well done Love Mom

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/18/2015 8:54:00 AM

Thanks Mom, I love you too!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2015 1:10:00 PM

Dear Richard, we do choose our own directions and sometimes it does lead to pain. Still, I believe if you find the right person, you will feel better about yourself. Some of us harbor no intentions of engaging in conflict and we're looking for men just like you. (Wish you lived next door.) Love, carolyn

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/15/2015 3:24:00 PM

No worries my primary relationship is very much in tact, I am very fortunate. Thanks for caring.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2015 10:36:00 PM

gosh, I hope this is not from something that happened to you with a poetrysoup friend or anything. I really like this poem. You are a talented man. I am searching for the poem you said was a tribute to Armand. Maybe I will find it soon.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/15/2015 3:29:00 PM

Thanks for searching out my poem for Armand. Thanks for the positive comment as well.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/14/2015 3:25:00 PM

beautiful, again you have added poetic genius to every day happenings. I have had some major disagreements and bad times with my good friends, and we are all much stronger for it today, true friends stick by through thick and thin! ( as I know you know )

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/15/2015 3:31:00 PM

So true Arthur!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/14/2015 6:50:00 AM

disagreements and mistakes can either break or spice up more a relationship.... Anyhow, sometimes a dialogue, sincerity and i agree to what Rhonda says below forgiveness.. :)thanks for commenting on my poems.. :)!..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2015 8:22:00 AM

Yes forgiveness is key.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/14/2015 3:39:00 AM

Misunderstandings and mistakes are inevitable in any relationship....apologies and forgiveness are key...in the end, what's meant to work out does...hugs, Rhonda

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2015 8:23:00 AM

Thanks Rhonda, you are so right. Hugs back.

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/13/2015 3:58:00 PM

I understand this one.... Hugs..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2015 8:26:00 AM

Thanks and a big hug to you as well.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/13/2015 2:26:00 PM

I can feel the pain in this write, Richard. As long as there are TWO people, there will be differences of opinion and ways of viewing things. If the friendship is worth it, it will stand the test of time. There is NO relationship without conflict. That's a fact of life. Some things are worth fighting for....friendship is one of those things.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2015 8:28:00 AM

I agree Eileen, I place a very high value on friendships. Thanks for this thoughtful note.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/13/2015 1:27:00 PM

Aristotle, the Greek philosopher of the 4th century BC has said, that friends are those who have one soul in two bodies and added that those who have many friends in reality have none! A true friendship is a two way street, as you know my friend, Richard! A true friend thinks of his friend first and then for himself! If the other person who we consider our friend doesn't feel the same then he is not our friend and should not suffer for him! Nothing is wrong with you! Actions prove our words!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/14/2015 1:33:00 PM

Good for you both! Hope you would always have that understanding. My comment though stands for those who have not got it!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2015 8:31:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios, there is also nothing wrong with my friend. Fortunately we moved beyond being upset to a place of understanding.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/13/2015 12:55:00 PM

we just need to clarify the meaning of interchanges, rich... a moving write well told... huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2015 8:32:00 AM

Thanks and a hug back to you dear one.

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/13/2015 11:45:00 AM

I feel the weight of your words, Rick. There are times when no matter how good our intentions are, they just aren't enough -for the time being. That's why we learn to be patient, just letting the other person feel that whenever he/she is ready, we'll still be there, waiting. Once again, you've shown sensitivity, Rick. It matters a lot.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2015 8:37:00 AM

Thanks Kim, we all have our weaknesses, staying is one of our greatest strengths. I do agree we do need to give friends space and time to feel.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/13/2015 10:54:00 AM

Friends are like family,They know us like our mirror and so do we.Friendships arent always plain sailing.Friends fight,friends quarrel,friends have misunderstandings and disagreements,but what makes them friends,is that they always find a way to love and support each other again..Thats what makes them special.We are not perfect and our words may not always come out in ways our friends desire, but i do care about the intention and not the deed mostly,and im sure friends have good intent always.Deep-fiction or not,and shows how one should care always and treasure friends..Btw thanks for being a friend!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2015 8:42:00 AM

It is a pleasure to be your friend. Thanks for these thoughtful words Charmaine.