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Under the Weather

Today I feel a bit under the weather
I think it's the flu,I want to get better 

You made me soup and gave me some oj
Baby you have definitely  made my day

But It doesn't matter if I'm sick or well
You always make me feel so special 

Waking up next to you, trump's bad days
My darling your love, continues to amaze 

I've never regretted saying I do, 
I couldn't imagine a life without you


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Alexis Y

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

January 5, 2017 at 7:37 AM

A refreshing poem that adds some meaning to the vow, "in sickness and in health." Very intimate and loving poem, Alexis. It's always nice to have someone help tend to you when you're under the weather. A very spiritual, yet so human poem. Great job w/expressing your thoughts through this poem. Love it. A healthy cup of Soup 7 for you and this sweet poem. Love and good health to you, dear.

Afzal Nusker

January 4, 2017 at 9:57 AM

I loved the whole poem especially the words "trump's bad days." Lol.

Alexis Y.

January 4, 2017 at 10:02 AM

Hi Afzal, It's good to see you. I don't look at from that angel. I must say "I" like that part too. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

White Wolf

January 4, 2017 at 9:50 AM

I can just picture you all snuggled up in bed with a nice bowl of soup, and your poetrysoup of course. Haha. Chicken noodle I find good for the flu! Get well soon, still, your poetry hasn't suffered.

Alexis Y.

January 4, 2017 at 9:55 AM

Hi Rick, All of these nice comments are having a positive affect on my spirit. That alone is making me feel better. Thank you so much. I'm glad you stopped by:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands

January 4, 2017 at 7:45 AM

Very sweet Alexis. I hope you are feeling better soon . :)

Alexis Y.

January 4, 2017 at 7:58 AM

Hi Heidi, Thanks. Me too. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Paloma P

January 4, 2017 at 7:41 AM

So sweet, it's nice to have someday to dote on you when you're sick. The flu is even worse when nobody cares.

Alexis Y.

January 4, 2017 at 7:48 AM

Hi Paloma, It's so good to see you. I agree, having someone by your side when you don't feel well is very special. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis