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Dr. Foster lived in old fashioned London, and was content to stay there; As red roses are content being caressed, by the wind from everywhere. Dr. Foster loved his daily routine, like the violet repeat of honeyed days; And he stuck to their rhythm faithfully, like a valentine heart, ever stays. Besides, his work kept him quite busy, easing pain, and bringing smiles; Like vermilion mountains at moonrise, or a colorful rainbow's hazy tiles. Since failure isn't a familiar word in nature, like rebirth of spring flowers, Friends flocked to visit, any weather, as jazz days, wile away green hours. Though Dr. Foster was a widower, his fond, adult children fittingly, visited, In the flittering, falling days of autumn-in the beauty of seasons, pivoted. He lived in the house of pearl glamour, and moonbeams coating the roof; During cozy hours of compelling reading-beneath sunstruck clouds, aloof. His street of red and teal flowers, was lovely, like a maroon hush, settles; In sublime, sun soaked afternoons, or coccoa, molasses dusk, red petals! Nectarine sun was at nether nadir, when nigh neighbors dreamt of a visit; To rove the narrow paths of narcissus, undernearh pink moonshine, illicit. 'Astrantia sparkling star' flowers flashed pinkly, as 'dark prince' ruled night, Waiting for 'petunia midnight gold' to shine, like wild, winged doves in flight. 'Begonia angel wings' looked heavenly, the memorable, starlit summer long; As 'bearded' irises, walked like a man, and 'burning hearts' felt love strong. Dr. Foster had been musing on travel, to disrupt a mosaic pattern of days, Finally deciding to see new sights in Glouchester-to feel sun's warm rays! So, the pleasant, curious homebody, embarked on a dream vacation, ideal; Like dreams dreamt back when it all began, afore you knew they'd be real. But, in the charming Glouchester, it rained, for many sodden days on end. One day, Dr. Foster stepped in a big puddle, when trying, a hill to descend! Soaking wet, he decided to go home. Then he began to pack immediately. After a nice evening, the next day he left, despite plans made previously. Dr. Foster never revisited Glouchester, like a comet returning, not too soon; Or like many hued, magical primroses, appearing only beneath pearl moon. 'Doctor Foster went to Gloucester, In a shower of rain; He stepped in a puddle, Right up to his middle, And never went there again.'

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Date: 6/17/2025 4:39:00 PM
Dr. Foster went to Gloucester. Whoa. What a line. I'll never forget it, Evelyn. Bravo. ~ Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/17/2025 5:10:00 PM
Poor Dr. Foster! What a nightmare scenario. But, at least he's dried off now. :D
Date: 2/17/2025 6:57:00 PM
Absolutely adorable. This is another nursery rhyme winner.i enjoy these. I hope you don't run out.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/18/2025 1:34:00 PM
Thank you you for the kind compliment, Hilda. I will write these sories as long as I possibly can. I do enjoy it. ;)
Date: 2/17/2025 4:43:00 PM
I enjoy so much your Nursery Rhyme elucidation!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/17/2025 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. That is so nice to hear.
Date: 2/16/2025 12:18:00 PM
I wish to inhale the fragrance of your flowers. Lovely tale,
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/16/2025 6:59:00 PM
What a nice thought! Thank you, Victor. :)
Date: 2/15/2025 6:35:00 PM
You never cease to create an impressive aroma out of your poetic sagas, dear sweet Evelyn!! I absolutely love the fragrances which flow throughout your descriptions in this piece and portraying the life of Dr. Foster. I could actually imagine all the evocative scenes which you've painted here! "Waiting for 'petunia midnight gold' to shine, like wild, winged doves in flight", "Nectarine sun was at nether nadir" Absolutely love these artistic lines and your use of alliteration. That ending, especially! Brilliant work! Sending you light and best wishes always ~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/15/2025 8:45:00 PM
Dear Hiya, thank you so much for your warm, appreciative remarks, which give me an absolute lift. I'm very pleased that you enjoyed the alliteration, the imagery, and the ending. Have a blessed weekend. :)
Date: 2/15/2025 11:46:00 AM
What a creative write/story you have here with great pictures. I enjoyed reading this one. Love your ending. Yes, never to turn... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day as you write away..................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/15/2025 8:37:00 PM
I'm so glad you enjoyed this, Paula. Thank you very much for your kind expressions. Have a great weekend. :)
Date: 2/15/2025 1:49:00 AM
awesome poetry, touch me as i have trouble with doctors now for diabetes, long life to doctors best wishes
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/15/2025 8:31:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging words, my friend. I sympathize with your medical challenges, and I pray for better health for you. Hope your weekend is nice.
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