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Under the Tree

Under the Tree, Santa in flight Gifts being shared, so much delight. Such a joyous, fun time of year, So much giving… holiday cheer. Blizzard in my, stomach all night. I hope Santa gets my gift right, I have been good, and do not fight. In the morning, will it be here Under the Tree. On Christmas Day, eyes touched by light, Oh that gift would be a sweet sight. Did Santa come, with his reindeer? I’m in jitters, will it appear. Then I see, a shiny new bike Under the Tree. By: Greg Stanley For Cyndi’s “Gifts Given, Gifts Received” Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/12/2012 5:58:00 PM
so we were as children!Thanks for all your nice comments. Light & Love
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Date: 1/6/2012 5:55:00 PM
Very exciting work that you have penned..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/5/2012 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Cyndi's~ "Gifts Given--Received" contest Greg. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2012 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM Greg. Enjoyed
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Date: 1/4/2012 7:15:00 PM
Very nice write here Greg.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/13/2011 6:25:00 AM
love how you wrote it from a child's pov. the rationalizing/questioning in his head was cute. a good entry for the contest :)
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