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Under the Sun

beneath a golden sun
dressed the part
for an outdoor
midsummer concert

in parade the musicians
they curtsy sweet in harmony
together launch
their whimsical quartet

and us as guests
leisurely enjoy
the cocktail hour
while others partake
in high noon tea



AP: Honorable Mention 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Watt Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 10:08 PM
A lucky man. Sounds like a beautiful day filled with love and music ~ John
Gauthier Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 10:56 PM
LOL thanks for your lovely visit and comment, John.
Kiser Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 6:22 PM
What a great day! Sounds just fantastic and beautiful.
Gauthier Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 8:50 PM
Thanks, ML. Certainly was/would be!
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 5:38 PM
oh how wonderful line, this sounds like an amazing afternoon of entertainment and scrumptious refreshments and a lovely pic of your beloved:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 6:09 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. I do love this photo I took two months before our wedding.
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