Under the Sun

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beneath a golden sun
dressed the part
for an outdoor
midsummer concert
in parade the musicians 
they curtsy sweet in harmony
together launch
their whimsical quartet
and us as guests
leisurely enjoy
the cocktail hour
while others partake
in high noon tea



AP: Honorable Mention 2023

Posted on March 1, 2020

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John Watt

Date: 3/1/2020 10:08:00 PM

A lucky man. Sounds like a beautiful day filled with love and music ~ John

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2020 10:56:00 PM

LOL thanks for your lovely visit and comment, John.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/1/2020 6:22:00 PM

What a great day! Sounds just fantastic and beautiful.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2020 8:50:00 PM

Thanks, ML. Certainly was/would be!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/1/2020 5:38:00 PM

oh how wonderful line, this sounds like an amazing afternoon of entertainment and scrumptious refreshments and a lovely pic of your beloved:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2020 6:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan. I do love this photo I took two months before our wedding.