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Under the Stars

Under the stars...Laying back together with a blanket on the ground; We listen to the music of crickets all around. Under the stars...We conversate into early morning hours. You smell so ravishing like a bed of Jasmine flowers. Under the stars...With the cresent moon shining brightly above; It's a warm June and our bodies glisten with perspiration from making love. Under the stars...We lay in a lovers embrace; I lose track of time while looking into your gorgeous face. Under the stars...Until the crack of dawn. We will keep our bodies close till these stars are gone! *For Laura McKenzie's contest "Beyond Nightfall!"

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Date: 3/3/2010 5:07:00 PM
a sweet love verse...rhyme form...the type of rhyme is called slip or half rhyme...as in hours/flowers...the ow sounds the same....dawn/gone...same awwn sound...Light & Love
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:14:00 PM
In the still of night..with jasmine wafting, on the grass, in the moon light....two bodies. Stuff that dreams are made off, JAM Great one! Love always, Peanut butter
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Date: 3/1/2010 11:17:00 AM
Beautiful entry,,and im in love with the last verse"We will keep our bodies close till these stars are gone"..Outstanding..bravo..Charma
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