Under the Shower

Carrying my bliss with them
kissing your deep navel and
magic golden triangle
dance of waterdrops!



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By :kashinath karmakar(1st January 2011)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Hamilton Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 7:09 AM
capturing passion and romance so perfectly Kash congrats on being featured Shadow x smile
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 5:50 PM
Back at your sexy poem. That was so sweet what you said about my poem's ending, that the flower's name was Andrea. I have written about myself as a flower here at Soup. Can you guess which flower I am? I have one that I think of as my flower! Do guys do that kind of thing? Think of a flower they might be?
Babcock Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 12:45 PM
Oh la la la fun in the shower. Enjoyed this write. God Bless Phyl
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 1:09 PM
this is spicy indeed! Luv, Andrea
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