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Under the Same Sun

,,, She loves and laughs with her whole entire being inspiring you with joy Knows the moment something’s wrong and showers you with concern Putting you first as she gives without hesitation My friend though you are miles away When winds dry your tears and catch your heart… believe in the magic of my love With a soft, gentle style, she has graced my life, with kind words, and a warm smile Interlaced with caring, laughter and compassion… extending her hand in friendship Home for her, is the side of the horizon, where my eyes can’t quite reach, But, my heart knows her touch…. We are friends, …who walk under the same sun, or under the same moon, …together _____________________________________________________________________ Inspired By Tracie Edwards' Contest: "Grab a mate and collaborate" Sharon Weimer (1) Carrie Richards (2)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2011 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your co-write win in Tracie's "Grab A Mate" contest Shar. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2011 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your co-write win in Tracie's "Grab A Mate" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/16/2011 3:40:00 PM

Congratulations to both of you on your win!

Red Fiery

Date: 9/16/2011 3:01:00 PM

But, my heart knows her touch…. We are friends, …who walk under the same sun, or under the same moon, …together I was touched by the eternity of emotions in this poem. Great collaboration ! God bless u ..

Jack Horne

Date: 9/16/2011 1:17:00 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Carrie : )

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/16/2011 12:55:00 PM

I just had to smile so wide when I read this-- such a very heart touching write from two beautiful gems!! I definitely felt that wonderful sense of friendship in this write, Carrie and to read your collab with Shar is truly a sweet and wonderful treat! Super congrats to you both-- you are both so blessed to have this wonderful friendship across the miles :D thank you as well for your touching comments ^_^

Tracy Edwards

Date: 9/15/2011 8:48:00 PM

Congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest Carrie, please pass on my congrats to Sharon as well xxx

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/15/2011 8:36:00 PM

Lovely poems to friendship. Congratulations to both of you. iIam going to look for Sharon. I thought she has been posting once in a while. I run across her in some of my magazine postings.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2011 7:58:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on a wonderful winning collaboration with Shar and Richard .. awesome piece luv ..

Tracy Edwards

Date: 9/15/2011 6:54:00 PM

Carrie hun has Sharon left soup...I cant find her poem anywhere, or is she still having problems from the storms? Im going to place your poem..but i cant list her name on the contest list. Sorry xxx

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/29/2011 10:58:00 AM

Beautiful collaboration and wonderful write by both of you my friends. What a universal approach in your last lines' We are friends, …who walk under the same sun, or under the same moon, …together' and in Sharon's lines 'My friend though you are miles away When winds dry your tears and catch your heart… believe in the magic of my love' Both of you have painted outstandingly beautiful lines. My good wishes for your contest entry. I have placed a new Poem hope U like it. Love & B W.Ravindra. C.R

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 8/27/2011 7:11:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS for a great collaboration~~~smile at your best together~~~*-*junjun

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/27/2011 6:25:00 PM

Great work. So nice, Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2011 2:56:00 PM

Nice collaboration, Carrie and Sharon