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Under the Same Sun

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She loves and laughs with her whole entire being inspiring you with joy
Knows the moment something’s wrong and showers you with concern
Putting you first as she gives without hesitation 
My friend though you are miles away 
When winds dry your tears and catch your heart… believe in the magic of my love




With a soft, gentle style, she has graced my life, with kind words, and a warm smile
Interlaced with caring, laughter and compassion… extending her hand in friendship
Home for her, is the side of the horizon, where my eyes can’t quite reach,
But, my heart knows her touch….   
We are friends, …who walk under the same sun, or under the same moon, …together


                                                                                                                                     

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Inspired By Tracie Edwards' Contest:  "Grab a mate and collaborate"

 Sharon Weimer (1)
 Carrie Richards (2)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

September 21, 2011 at 10:21 AM

Congratulations on your co-write win in Tracie's "Grab A Mate" contest Shar. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 21, 2011 at 10:20 AM

Congratulations on your co-write win in Tracie's "Grab A Mate" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

September 16, 2011 at 3:40 PM

Congratulations to both of you on your win!

Red Fiery

September 16, 2011 at 3:01 PM

But, my heart knows her touch…. We are friends, …who walk under the same sun, or under the same moon, …together I was touched by the eternity of emotions in this poem. Great collaboration ! God bless u ..

Jack Horne

September 16, 2011 at 1:17 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Carrie : )

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

September 16, 2011 at 12:55 PM

I just had to smile so wide when I read this-- such a very heart touching write from two beautiful gems!! I definitely felt that wonderful sense of friendship in this write, Carrie and to read your collab with Shar is truly a sweet and wonderful treat! Super congrats to you both-- you are both so blessed to have this wonderful friendship across the miles :D thank you as well for your touching comments ^_^

Tracy Edwards

September 15, 2011 at 8:48 PM

Congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest Carrie, please pass on my congrats to Sharon as well xxx

Joyce Johnson

September 15, 2011 at 8:36 PM

Lovely poems to friendship. Congratulations to both of you. iIam going to look for Sharon. I thought she has been posting once in a while. I run across her in some of my magazine postings.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 15, 2011 at 7:58 PM

Congrats Carrie on a wonderful winning collaboration with Shar and Richard .. awesome piece luv ..

Tracy Edwards

September 15, 2011 at 6:54 PM

Carrie hun has Sharon left soup...I cant find her poem anywhere, or is she still having problems from the storms? Im going to place your poem..but i cant list her name on the contest list. Sorry xxx

Ravindra K Kapoor

August 29, 2011 at 10:58 AM

Beautiful collaboration and wonderful write by both of you my friends. What a universal approach in your last lines' We are friends, …who walk under the same sun, or under the same moon, …together' and in Sharon's lines 'My friend though you are miles away When winds dry your tears and catch your heart… believe in the magic of my love' Both of you have painted outstandingly beautiful lines. My good wishes for your contest entry. I have placed a new Poem hope U like it. Love & B W.Ravindra. C.R