Jack Horne Poet Limerick

Under the Moon In June

I cringed as she reached for a prune
in June as we gazed at the moon,
I kissed her before
she ate any more,
and knew she'd be running off soon...

written 5th June for Andrea's Moon in June contest

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Paul Callus July 19, 2022 at 1:53 PM Excellent, Jack!! Both the content and smooth flow of this Limerick are proof of your writing ability in this poetic form. Best regards // paul

Sara Kendrick July 18, 2022 at 1:25 PM Back with congrats. Thanks for all your visits. Sara

Sam Kauffman June 13, 2022 at 9:44 AM Great giggle Jack. Lesson - never eat prunes in the moonlight! Congratulations on your win!

Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2022 at 11:45 PM Ha, I nearly put this in third place. This is a really good one, Jack. Thanks for entering it in my contest.

Sara Kendrick June 6, 2022 at 3:50 PM Reads like a winner. Way to go. I imagine this was easy to think of since things that you go through. Sara

Kim Rodrigues June 5, 2022 at 11:30 AM LOL! She’ll be making that pruneface!

Jenna Logan June 5, 2022 at 9:19 AM So worth a laugh out loud. Good limerick, Jack.

L Milton Hankins June 5, 2022 at 9:18 AM Oh my! Another very funny one, Jack. Good luck in the contest. I think Andrea was looking for humor.