Under the Magical Spell

On the woolly folds of sleep, I sailed to a place Where thoughts and fancy made an alliance A place that never existed anywhere on the Earth And never seen or glimpsed by any human eyes Before me, I could see in glistening sheen A rare beauty and a rare grandeur That heaven seemed to have come down to earth And the sky and the Earth draped in great splendor All about me was liquid silver’s dazzling glow With eddy swirls and falling beams Above me was the vast panorama of the sky With chiffon clouds straying far into the seams Soon I found myself in the cool seclusion of trees With several rows of flowers bordering the fringe It looked the angels’ most frequented haunt From where they gathered blooms of varied tinge The boughs of trees drooped with blossom’s weight Leaves trembled in the might of passing gales Tickling rills and somersaulting cataracts Gave a heavenly dimension to half lit vales The meadows were dotted with violets and bluebells Also clusters of flowers that never seemed to fade Sweet birds were heard singing on every bush and tree Below, golden sunbeams played, filtering through the shade In full mirth I coursed through the planes Wherever I looked, I found all so fair to view Gorgeous visions flashed and dimmed And everything in a magical spell cast in heavenly hue Though freed from slumber’s entangling mesh I refused to open my eyes to detain my dream How I wished I could still be under the magical spell Of that celestial plane, my fancy’s chimeric realm!
Placed Sixth March.12.2022 Magical Spell Poetry Contest Sponsor- Robert James Liguori

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Date: 3/17/2022 10:47:00 AM
Poetic. Beautiful work. Congrats on placement.
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Date: 3/18/2022 7:17:00 AM
Thanks a lot Robert for the placement of my poem in the winners list ! Much obliged !
Date: 3/17/2022 10:08:00 AM
Back with congratulations for your win Valsa! Delightful and dreamy! So many of us want to remain in those spellbinding dreams! Blessings of happy dreams to you!
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Date: 3/18/2022 7:30:00 AM
Much grateful for your stepping into congratulate me . I congratulate you too for your win, Sam
Date: 3/17/2022 8:24:00 AM
Some very beautiful and elegant descriptions. A really nice entry. Well Done and congrats on coming top ten :-D
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Valsa George
Date: 3/18/2022 7:27:00 AM
Your visit to my page is much appreciated Natasha ! Much gratitude to you !
Date: 3/17/2022 5:02:00 AM
Very beautiful experience and inner serenity. Beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/18/2022 7:26:00 AM
Thank you so much great poet friend ! Much delighted!
Date: 3/15/2022 2:23:00 PM
Valsa, you have such a gift for stunning, jaw dropping, original thought and poetic expression! It is always fresh, renewing the spirit. Blessings and all the best for the contest.
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Date: 3/18/2022 7:25:00 AM
You have raised me to cloud nine ! Thanks a lot gifted poet friend. This comment from a person of your stature is much appreciated !
Date: 3/14/2022 7:25:00 PM
I absolutely loved my trek throughout your remarkable story. Valsa, you have tremendous creativity, and the mystical gems you have on them are very stunning!
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Valsa George
Date: 3/18/2022 7:23:00 AM
You give me wings by your sweet comments ! Thanks a lot dear friend !
Date: 3/13/2022 11:43:00 AM
Cherish this view and don't let Putin in! Aloha!
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Date: 3/18/2022 7:21:00 AM
Will Putin dare to step in .... I wonder ! He has a tendency to own all that is beautiful :) Thanks a lot Rico
Date: 3/13/2022 7:50:00 AM
Valsa, this is magical, as everything has come to life. Well written. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/18/2022 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Debra for your lovely comment ! Blessings !
Date: 3/13/2022 5:50:00 AM
Splendid imagination, Valsa. Enjoyed the journey through your magical tale. Excellent, as always.
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Date: 3/18/2022 7:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay ! Warm Regards :)
Date: 3/12/2022 11:51:00 PM
It seems to me that everything you've written in whatever form that I've so far read, always have magical gems adorning them! A toast to you Valsa!...ab
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Date: 3/13/2022 1:06:00 AM
Wow..... you have made my day, Anselmo ! I don't know how I must thank you ! Compared to your esoteric style, my poems are simple ! Thanks for this lovely comment !
Date: 3/12/2022 8:42:00 PM
Oh this IS magical Valsa! Love it! In full mirth!
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Date: 3/13/2022 1:03:00 AM
Thank you so much James !Feel so delighted by your referring to my poem as a gem ! Warm regards, dear friend !
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