Under the Magical Spell

On the woolly folds of sleep, I sailed to a place Where thoughts and fancy made an alliance A place that never existed anywhere on the Earth And never seen or glimpsed by any human eyes Before me, I could see in glistening sheen A rare beauty and a rare grandeur That heaven seemed to have come down to earth And the sky and the Earth draped in great splendor All about me was liquid silver’s dazzling glow With eddy swirls and falling beams Above me was the vast panorama of the sky With chiffon clouds straying far into the seams Soon I found myself in the cool seclusion of trees With several rows of flowers bordering the fringe It looked the angels’ most frequented haunt From where they gathered blooms of varied tinge The boughs of trees drooped with blossom’s weight Leaves trembled in the might of passing gales Tickling rills and somersaulting cataracts Gave a heavenly dimension to half lit vales The meadows were dotted with violets and bluebells Also clusters of flowers that never seemed to fade Sweet birds were heard singing on every bush and tree Below, golden sunbeams played, filtering through the shade In full mirth I coursed through the planes Wherever I looked, I found all so fair to view Gorgeous visions flashed and dimmed And everything in a magical spell cast in heavenly hue Though freed from slumber’s entangling mesh I refused to open my eyes to detain my dream How I wished I could still be under the magical spell Of that celestial plane, my fancy’s chimeric realm!
Placed Sixth March.12.2022 Magical Spell Poetry Contest Sponsor- Robert James Liguori
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Liguori Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 10:47 AM
Poetic. Beautiful work. Congrats on placement.
George Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 7:17 AM
Thanks a lot Robert for the placement of my poem in the winners list ! Much obliged !
Kauffman Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 10:08 AM
Back with congratulations for your win Valsa! Delightful and dreamy! So many of us want to remain in those spellbinding dreams! Blessings of happy dreams to you!
George Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 7:30 AM
Much grateful for your stepping into congratulate me . I congratulate you too for your win, Sam
Scragg Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Some very beautiful and elegant descriptions. A really nice entry. Well Done and congrats on coming top ten :-D
George Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 7:27 AM
Your visit to my page is much appreciated Natasha ! Much gratitude to you !
Alex Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 5:02 AM
Very beautiful experience and inner serenity. Beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
George Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 7:26 AM
Thank you so much great poet friend ! Much delighted!
Kauffman Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Valsa, you have such a gift for stunning, jaw dropping, original thought and poetic expression! It is always fresh, renewing the spirit. Blessings and all the best for the contest.
George Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 7:25 AM
You have raised me to cloud nine ! Thanks a lot gifted poet friend. This comment from a person of your stature is much appreciated !
Poet Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 7:25 PM
I absolutely loved my trek throughout your remarkable story. Valsa, you have tremendous creativity, and the mystical gems you have on them are very stunning!
George Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 7:23 AM
You give me wings by your sweet comments ! Thanks a lot dear friend !
Leffanta Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 11:43 AM
Cherish this view and don't let Putin in! Aloha!
George Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 7:21 AM
Will Putin dare to step in .... I wonder ! He has a tendency to own all that is beautiful :) Thanks a lot Rico
Brown Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 7:50 AM
Valsa, this is magical, as everything has come to life. Well written. Blessings ~ Debra
George Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Thank you Debra for your lovely comment ! Blessings !
Pandit Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 5:50 AM
Splendid imagination, Valsa. Enjoyed the journey through your magical tale. Excellent, as always.
George Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Thank you so much Vijay ! Warm Regards :)
Boles Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 11:51 PM
It seems to me that everything you've written in whatever form that I've so far read, always have magical gems adorning them! A toast to you Valsa!...ab
George Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 1:06 AM
Wow..... you have made my day, Anselmo ! I don't know how I must thank you ! Compared to your esoteric style, my poems are simple ! Thanks for this lovely comment !
Goff Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 8:42 PM
Oh this IS magical Valsa! Love it! In full mirth!
George Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 1:03 AM
Thank you so much James !Feel so delighted by your referring to my poem as a gem ! Warm regards, dear friend !
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