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Under the Half Eaten Coconut Moon

desiccated stars sprinkled crumbs that surround a half eaten coconut moon I lick my lips this ethereal delicacy above me calls me to indulge in a visual feast to sate my soul if only you were here... My love, if only we'd lie here together relishing every last bite and when the last soul crumb was gone we'd turn our carnal lips to feed on each other's bodies indulging in a physical feast to sate our desires under a half eaten coconut moon while those desiccated sprinkled stars twinkle on... Eileen Manassian

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Maria Williams

Date: 11/15/2017 8:40:00 PM

Aww whats there not to love about this imaginative poem. I shall always look now at a half eaten moon and think of coconut. And the desiccated sprinkled stars. Wow, I feel like a coconut chocolate bounty right now. lol....Maria xxx

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/2/2017 8:10:00 PM

Ohh this is such a scrumptious write Eileen. So beautifully written with lovely lines of amazing imagery. Loved it. A delightful and decadent joy! :)))

Dean Wood

Date: 8/1/2017 8:53:00 AM

Oh wow! This is wonderful! You amaze me sometimes Eileen. -- Dean

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/1/2017 8:44:00 AM

A hot one Eileen. ;0)

Aurore Severo

Date: 7/31/2017 10:10:00 PM

You inspire me sis!!!!!!! peace and love xoxoxoxo

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/31/2017 7:41:00 PM

This is so romantically beautiful my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing and stunning poem this evening, you have made me head spin with this lovely piece! Great Work!!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 7/31/2017 7:36:00 PM

Love your creative imagery, Eileen!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/31/2017 6:01:00 PM

Nice!

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/31/2017 4:31:00 PM

You my friend, never fail in delivering exceptional and very creative verses in romantic poems.. Always a pleasure to read your creations!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/31/2017 4:37:00 PM

Thanks, Robert. I'm a hopeless romantic. I'm no good at humor. We each have our strong points. :) Appreciate the comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/31/2017 4:31:00 PM

I've just seen the moon it isn't half as beautiful and sensual as your poem!:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/31/2017 4:35:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie. This holiday is doing me good. :) ;) We go home on Thursday, then it's off to Vienna and Budapest. We leave my daughter there to continue her studies. BOOO!

Silent One

Date: 7/31/2017 4:04:00 PM

Oooh... sounds lovelt and sweet..

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/31/2017 4:06:00 PM

Thank you, SO. The moon's been on my mind. Today at the beach, we saw a crescent moon in the middle of the day. I found it .... strange. I was floating peacefully and looking at it. I guess it really got to me.