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Under the Dying Cloud

We gathered our dead Collected the longbows For the Giving Tree Had made them especially For a company of men For some suffered In their death throes Under the dying cloud We honoured our men In a fading sunset sky For they turned In to nature And magic And like leaves Tumbled by The sun bowed The darkness came The stars rose The fallen men In their death throes Became the light in the night sky Under the dying cloud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/25/2009 9:04:00 PM
Wow! What a profound and moving poem. Interesting perspective--one that gives the reader something to think about. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 4/3/2009 6:09:00 PM
Very beautiful poem. I felt like i was watching an epic battle that was magical and enchanting. Great right, Matt
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