Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Under the Candlelight

By the candlelight your smile shines.
                                   We cuddle close in a world with closed blinds.
                                           Touching in the shadows of light, 
                                        we caress eachother to new heights.
                                    Till the wax drips down and the light fades.
                           The moonlight picks up from where the candle cascades.
                                  In musical harmony we lay across piano keys.
                            As we tickle the ivory with skin and a humming tease..

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Jack Horne March 5, 2012 at 2:09 PM Lovely romantic write, my friend. Many congrats on your wins : )

Dinda Minardi March 5, 2012 at 9:04 AM This is just too romantic, Michael :)

Charmaine Chircop March 5, 2012 at 6:19 AM i meant lovely :)

Charmaine Chircop March 5, 2012 at 6:18 AM Wow ..very romantic :).. beautifully done ,,lovley ...Charma

Wilma Neels March 5, 2012 at 12:44 AM hehe, I am looking forward to the Monorhyme for Russell's contest Michael :-) I seriously enjoyed your couplet and I know you can to the other one too :) love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 4, 2012 at 3:47 PM wow and wow again Michael luv.. fabulous imagination sets the scene for luv play ..oh.. JG in flash mode..now.. exquisite write luv.. good luck if u decide to enter it.. xoxo

Michael J. Falotico March 4, 2012 at 2:34 PM Yes Carolyn, I just saw it myself... Its ok I removed it from the contest and will attempt one in the proper form...Thanks for the wonderful comments... luv n hugs ps thanks for shorter write for me....

Carolyn Devonshire March 4, 2012 at 2:02 PM Oops, I just read Kash's comment. I haven't seen the posting for Russell's contest, but you might want to check out the monorhyme requirement Kash mentioned. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire March 4, 2012 at 2:00 PM Michael, please find a knight who will cuddle by candlelight with me. This is such a beautful poem. I especialy love the way it progresses from the wax dripping to moonlight and a musial melody of passion. Alexa told me my entry for your contest was too long so I shortened it. Wishing you success in Russell's contest! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet March 4, 2012 at 12:22 PM A wonderful poem by you Michael.But I am afraid this is not a Monorhyme.This is a couplet.Russell wants a monorhyme.Please have a look.

Joe Maverick March 4, 2012 at 9:54 AM Here's wishing you success in the contest Michael,, a sensitive piece you have created here..)

Wilma Neels March 4, 2012 at 9:00 AM woo hoo someone went there with this one lol, enjoyed this Michael, all the best for Russell's contest.. me love this one!!Wilma

Deck Fitzgerald March 4, 2012 at 8:59 AM Nice write Michael , lends itself to so many images in the heart , was thinking how nice it would be to write a song in the the fab 4s style , lets hope such a contest arises , all the best my friend , Declan ...

Tracy Edwards March 4, 2012 at 8:26 AM Ooo I like this one and I can see it lol...Lovely Michael xxx Hugs

Nette Onclaud March 4, 2012 at 8:20 AM a soft scene warmed by the grace of your wafting words, michael.. i like the blend of musical inferences here...a winning piece!.:) huggs!