"under the Blanket"

The sweet taste of your morning kiss...
For under the blanket a mystery of bliss...

Our toes tingle to what's hidden beneath....
As our hearts sing while we cling to the sheets....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Locksley Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 5:06 PM
No, don't come out from under the blanket! Stay there and enjoy yourselves. What a fun poem, Michael.
Neels Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Come out from under the blanket!! Just kidding Michael, warm feeling while reading your couplet.. Could not help but smile :) love Wilma
Devonshire Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 6:18 AM
If you put this message in Tanka form it would make a great entry for Chris's "sanctuary" contest. Great work, Michael
A   Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 5:51 PM
why thank you Michael! One more to go... Couplets, i love this poetry form. Second favorite next to haiku. Love the image and the tenderness a morning can bring when your next to the love of your life. Nice blanket cover-up.. ;-) wink ;-) wink! smiles to you, have a wonderful one,..your poet friend,..L.)
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