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Under Our Rug

Under the rug it goes So nobody else will know Under the rug it goes Safe, beneath trodding toes Under the rug is safe For an unspoken mistake Under the rug there’s pain And spitted, rotten, distain Under the rug where secrets travel The fibers insure, nothing unravels

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Date: 9/19/2024 1:56:00 AM
You seem to be hiding something under the rug, which gives me the impression that it is not so pleasant. The word distain gives it ambiguous meaning. But a secret is a secret.
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