Under My Skin

Alone she sits at a table for two
In the corner bistro off Main
Cole Porter’s "I’ve Got You under My Skin"
Wafts softly throughout the room 
After hours of lingering hope 
She watches happy clients come and go
Bubbles of happiness fill their chatter
Laughter walks out trailing behind


Alone she sits and surveys the room
Even the wait staff now seems scarce
Time has vanished like steam in air
A waiter hints it is closing time
Table lights now give out a faint glow
Too much to bare, she decides to leave
But…O, how she loves him so! And though it's late
Still, she stalls… perhaps he will show up soon  

10/'09

For Brian Strand's Contest-A haiga to Edward Hopper's "Automat"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Sergi Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Hi Annalise, nice to know you. A beautiful poetic scenario set to one of Edward Hopper's paintings and strands of Cole Porter (WOW) Great write. My Compliments!
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 6:45 AM
A great narrative you have a natrul flow with your words keep writting and thank you for the comment
Torbenson Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 7:48 AM
nicely written keep up the good work
George   Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 11:50 PM
Audrey, You paint a very vivid picture with this well penned narrative. Love, Lainie
Fraser Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 5:35 PM
Excellent narrative Audrey, best of luck in Brian's contest >> James
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