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Under My Skin

Alone she sits at a table for two In the corner bistro off Main Cole Porter’s "I’ve Got You under My Skin" Wafts softly throughout the room After hours of lingering hope She watches happy clients come and go Bubbles of happiness fill their chatter Laughter walks out trailing behind Alone she sits and surveys the room Even the wait staff now seems scarce Time has vanished like steam in air A waiter hints it is closing time Table lights now give out a faint glow Too much to bare, she decides to leave But…O, how she loves him so! And though it's late Still, she stalls… perhaps he will show up soon 10/'09 For Brian Strand's Contest-A haiga to Edward Hopper's "Automat"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/19/2014 11:51:00 AM
Hi Annalise, nice to know you. A beautiful poetic scenario set to one of Edward Hopper's paintings and strands of Cole Porter (WOW) Great write. My Compliments!
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Date: 11/23/2009 6:45:00 AM
A great narrative you have a natrul flow with your words keep writting and thank you for the comment
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Date: 11/16/2009 7:48:00 AM
nicely written keep up the good work
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Date: 10/19/2009 11:50:00 PM
Audrey, You paint a very vivid picture with this well penned narrative. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/17/2009 5:35:00 PM
Excellent narrative Audrey, best of luck in Brian's contest >> James
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