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Under May's Emerald Sky

Who remembers? Only me? An emerald morning, the month of May We'd spread upon a kitchen table Paste of flour, fingers nimble, holding scissors, rainbow crayons Pretty paper doilies folded, then…. Posies, roses folded in The memory shrugs so many years away Where innocence, was cut and shaped Into bright-sprigged paper cones Such sweet accomplishments, each our own Then quickly running out the door To pick spring beauties, one by one Fresh Lilly of the Valley, wild wood fern, Gathered, heavy on their stems Sweet and fresh as morning dew, So filled with springtime, filled with bloom Then paper cones were flower filled Small bouquets of sweet perfume Then down the dusty road we trudged Side by side, with grins of pride No greater pleasure as a child The thought of bringing someone smiles Timid knocking on a neighbor's door Calling “Surprise...Surprise! Look what’s in store!” Our little legs would run fast, down the road, Behind a tree, where we would hide And watch them find this flower prize Must not....get caught.....must not get caught! And we were taught That bringing light to someone's eyes Was worth a lot !! Under Emerald May Day's vibrant skies For Tracie's Contest: "Flowers or Stones"...."May" 1/17/12

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Date: 1/21/2012 9:26:00 PM
congrats Carrie on a stupendous win for this wonderful write.. we May babies have it all luv..
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Date: 1/20/2012 2:31:00 AM
a pleaure to read you always, carrie.. my special kudos to you for the placement! :) huggs
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Date: 1/19/2012 11:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well deserved :) If possible could you lend me some/any advice on writing Narrative poems. I've written one but cannot seem to grasp the concept! Thank you, Sarah
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:29:00 AM
I love this Carrie. I'm a sucker for nostalgia and you capture it so well in this piece. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/19/2012 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations on the win for your poem in Tracie's "~Flowers or Stones~" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2012 6:58:00 AM
What a sweet story !! So vibrant !! Congrats in placement on the contest !! Well deserved !!
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Date: 1/17/2012 8:44:00 PM
A beautiful memory, certainly feels like a warm sunny may afternoon when reading. I like that you light up the different senses with this poem, very vibrant! :)
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