Under Her Influence

I cannot feel,I can barely 
speak.
Comfortably numb,incredibly 
weak.
Her,the same.
Am I to blame?
A simple match catches flame 
and suddenly i hear my name.
That soft spoken tone.."don't 
let me be alone"..
That's what she said,eyes 
rolled back looking halfway 
dead.
We touch for a moment and
"Never"..i say.
Forever I'll stay.
My speech is impaired.
But,HEART.thats always there.
..its time for more.
She takes a few,I take few.
Days fly by,so fast its true.
And everything I do,its all for you..
I'm under your influence...

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Date: 3/16/2014 6:16:00 AM
Congrats on your win for this lovely poem.
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Paul Martinez
Date: 3/17/2014 9:50:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 3/15/2014 7:41:00 AM
- Congratulations on your fine winning poem in Giorgio A.V. last contest, Paul. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2014 9:54:00 PM
Thank you very much,
Date: 3/15/2014 5:23:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win in the contest Impress me IV, paul
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Date: 3/14/2014 7:01:00 PM
Paul Congrats on Giorgio's contest... SKAT
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Date: 1/11/2014 12:06:00 AM
Enjoyed the write and congratulations on the win, Paul
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Date: 1/11/2014 12:28:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 1/10/2014 11:21:00 PM
Congratulations Paul, ... If you'd like take a trip to my blog ----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18527&PoetID=18720 <---- enjoy if you'd like... love Always & Forever <3 LINDA <3
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Date: 1/11/2014 12:30:00 AM
Thanks,i didnt expect a win but glad people read it
Date: 8/14/2013 6:09:00 AM
Yum, what a wonderful what a wonderful way to feel.
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Date: 8/13/2013 9:59:00 AM
Very nicely written, I so enjoyed it, soft , tender, and heartfelt, well one, welcome to the site poet friend, blessings sueellen
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Date: 8/11/2013 9:00:00 AM
well written , and excellent point made
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Date: 8/7/2013 3:57:00 PM
love it... like your style.. we ahave similar style.. check my poems out :)
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Date: 7/30/2013 10:41:00 AM
a deep write Paul... you have a big heart that shines through
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Date: 7/30/2013 2:10:00 PM
Thanks very much Royal:)
Date: 7/29/2013 7:46:00 AM
Excellent poem Paul , full of emotions. Keep them coming.
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Date: 7/29/2013 2:32:00 PM
Thanks for your feedback,I really appreciate it
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