Under Footle

step two
in poo

For Judy Konos's Footle contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bordner Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Step three, glee or pee...strangely, there is a neat double meaning in this write Richard. J.A.B.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 11:06 PM
Thanks again Justin.
Sirak Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 5:51 AM
It only takes a couple of words for your amazing talent to shine through!!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:33 AM
You are kind. Good morning Monterey.
Vaso Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 7:28 PM
Smells like a winner to me!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:34 AM
Ha ha, thanks.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Ewe.....but written with humor and wit.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:35 AM
Thanks Connie.
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 7:19 AM
Hilarious one again, Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:36 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 12:51 AM
Great humour Richard! fine comments to read too!brilliant work!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:37 AM
I must admit I am surprised at the positive reaction to this one *lol*
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 11:39 PM
hahaha, I am reading Freddie's comment!!! this one is good because many other rhymes are coming to my mind!!
Smith Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 5:03 PM
Oh no...lol...good one
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 7:27 PM
Thanks Tim.
Nance Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 4:20 PM
Funny!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 7:27 PM
Thanks Casarah.
Manassian Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 3:56 PM
;)
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 3:25 PM
I get it !!!! it'S oK TA' GET THE #2 POO ON YIR' SHOE!~
Walker  Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 3:09 PM
Oh, Rick... This is funny... Should place high... Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 3:16 PM
Thanks Verlena.
Curtis Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:42 PM
Ha, I was wondering how long it was going to take before you stuck your toe into this one, LOL
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:48 PM
Thanks Jerry.
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:36 PM
ha ha ha - great footle! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:49 PM
Thanks and a big hug back.
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