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Under an olive tree, covered from the sun we used to sit down. In the shade of an olive tree we laughed and had fun, out from the busy life in town. In the middle of nowhere we built castles in the sky, we drew stairs to go there knowing it was too high. Under that olive tree we don't sit anymore, we don't dream we can fly, our laughs are no more near to the castles in the sky.

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Date: 9/9/2023 3:54:00 PM
Excellent rhyming, Maria, everything changes with time. It's nice to look back on the thoughts and dreams of yesteryear. Have a joyful weekend! Bill
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/10/2023 12:44:00 AM
Hello my friend. You are right, everything changes and we also do. It's nice to look back sometimes and remember the good miments. Have a nice Sunday, Bill. Thanks. Blessings
Date: 8/31/2023 2:15:00 PM
wonderful and inspiring poem, really enjoyed yann
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/31/2023 2:40:00 PM
Thank you Yann. Have a lovely weekend
Date: 8/31/2023 1:23:00 PM
Life moves on. Nice bit of nostalgia
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/31/2023 1:27:00 PM
Yes, you are very right, Nostalgia. Thank you so muchxxx Have a nice afternoon

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