Under All

In this life I walk alone,
Along a path that is hardly known.
 
Against the world, against my fears,
Fighting nothing but hopes and tears.
 
Here I find a lonely rose,
It cries so softly that nobody knows.
 
I hold it tight so thorns pierce through,
Dripping down is blood so blue.
 
I continue on my path so grey,
Into the darkness of vast array.
 
A voice so lonely it will never be heard,
A life so worthless it should just be interred.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A  Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 3:08 AM
Lotti Dah, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
A   Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 11:42 PM
Lotti, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. :) Love -LINDA-
Andresen Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 6:50 AM
Moving poem....hope you will find some to go along with in your life. - oxox hug Anne-Lise
Britt Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 8:20 PM
Sentimental... but left me heartbroken. Oh, man. Poor rose <3
Dah Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 8:30 PM
Thank you very much :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace