Under a Strawberry Moon

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when all is ghostly quiet in the starry sky a whisper of your name is all that’s needed the green light for a midnight summer breeze stirring warm and dulcet to rise meandering about ever so gently caress my skin and on my lips land the most delightful kiss Submitted on January 2, 2023 for contest BRIAN STRAND NO.1165 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND AP: 1st place 2022 Posted on July 4, 2022

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Dr Zik

Date: 7/6/2022 9:23:00 PM

It's an amazing poem full of imagery in a romantic mood. It shows 73 % Zikorean Style and structure as we finds 8 lines out of total of 11 one in Zikelite form. This poem starts with 3 Zikets and gives and ends with a loving fourth Ziket. We know that a Zikelite poem is collection of two or more than two Zikets unde the same identical title to form a Zikorean poem. Line Gauthier is a famous Zikorean poet. Dr Zik YTchannel: Dr Zik Foundation Jhelum Pakistan July 7 2022

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/6/2022 10:46:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment ~