Under A Moonlit Sky

A sullied sun slips into oblivion without making a sound; and darkness rushes in to fill the void, left by light's demise. After Dusk, ebony skies morph into a bejeweled extravaganza of breathtaking beauty; sprinkled with stars. A beaming Luna, dressed in a golden gown, rises majestically into the heavens. And under a moonlit sky; love blossoms! Enchanted by the moon's gilded aura, time pauses, for magic, exists within the hearts of lovers in love. Two souls become immersed in each other, like pools of still waters; reflecting the harmony of hearts in love. Feelings surface with an emotional force; that carries dreams to the shores of forever, fueled by an elixir of hope and trust.
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Salama  Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 5:49 AM
Lovely poem! :)
Pinet Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 7:34 AM
Thanks Samia, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Watt Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 10:36 PM
Emile, I was happy for you today when I saw this poem at the top of the Best New Poems list. More congratulations are in order for this distinct honor, my friend! ~ John
Pinet Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 7:33 AM
Thanks so much John, I never knew that till now my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 11:41 AM
Wonderful writing, Emile . Glad you garnered a placement from Brian for this one! Congratulations.
Pinet Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 3:03 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Ibeh Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 6:29 PM
Back with heartiest congrats on a well-deserved top win, Emile:-)
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 7:34 PM
Thanks Edward, your support is always most welcome my friend, Emile.
Watt Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 6:21 PM
Romance and celestial beauty go hand in hand under your poetic touch, Emile. Skillfully woven free verse, I love the line "fueled by the elixir of hope and trust". Congratulations for your win, my friend ~ John
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 7:33 PM
Thanks John, you always leave me with a smile my friend. Emile.
Logan Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 7:14 AM
Your descriptive lines are beautiful, Emile. "...carries dreams to the shores of forever, fueled by the elixir of hope and trust. Congratulations on your lovely poem.
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 10:39 AM
Thank you Jenna, your words have touched my heart my friend, Emile.
Deepa Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 6:18 AM
Such a soothing romantic write Emile sir. Two souls immersed in each other like pools of still waters,~Each of lines are exciting:-) Congratulations on your win.Keep writing and keep inspiring us.Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 6:22 AM
Thank you so much Deepa, your kind words have touched my heart my friend, Emile.
Ermine Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 3:15 PM
Emile, you are an inspiration to everyone on here. When my heart is as free as yours, perhaps I will weave wonderment in a reader the way you do. Your Moonlit poem walks the gorgeous line of ethereal. Your depiction is majestic, brings hope to one.
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 6:21 AM
Thanks so much Sigrid, I appreciate your comments and support your honor me my friend, Emile.
Ibeh Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 12:43 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this terrific poem, Emile:-) I really enjoyed it!
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 6:20 AM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Mishra Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 12:33 PM
Absolutely enchanting one my friend. This is brilliant. Congratulations on your win Emile! :)
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 6:19 AM
Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Andresen Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 12:25 PM
- Really beautiful, Emile - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 6:18 AM
Thanks Sunshine, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 1:08 PM
This is a wonderfully romantic write Emile, just what I expected, never a let down with your writing!
Pinet Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 2:25 PM
Thanks so much John, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Michael Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 8:11 AM
A lovely write my friend...
Pinet Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Thanks Arturo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Gondolf Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 8:06 AM
I enjoyed this beautiful and romantic verse, Emile, best of luck in the contest. John
Pinet Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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