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Under A Moonlit Sky

A sullied sun slips into oblivion without making a sound; and darkness rushes in to fill the void, left by light's demise. After Dusk, ebony skies morph into a bejeweled extravaganza of breathtaking beauty; sprinkled with stars. A beaming Luna, dressed in a golden gown, rises majestically into the heavens. And under a moonlit sky; love blossoms! Enchanted by the moon's gilded aura, time pauses, for magic, exists within the hearts of lovers in love. Two souls become immersed in each other, like pools of still waters; reflecting the harmony of hearts in love. Feelings surface with an emotional force; that carries dreams to the shores of forever, fueled by an elixir of hope and trust.

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Date: 8/30/2020 5:49:00 AM
Lovely poem! :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/30/2020 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Samia, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/29/2020 10:36:00 PM
Emile, I was happy for you today when I saw this poem at the top of the Best New Poems list. More congratulations are in order for this distinct honor, my friend! ~ John
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/30/2020 7:33:00 AM
Thanks so much John, I never knew that till now my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2020 11:41:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Emile . Glad you garnered a placement from Brian for this one! Congratulations.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/9/2020 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/5/2020 6:29:00 PM
Back with heartiest congrats on a well-deserved top win, Emile:-)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2020 7:34:00 PM
Thanks Edward, your support is always most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/5/2020 6:21:00 PM
Romance and celestial beauty go hand in hand under your poetic touch, Emile. Skillfully woven free verse, I love the line "fueled by the elixir of hope and trust". Congratulations for your win, my friend ~ John
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2020 7:33:00 PM
Thanks John, you always leave me with a smile my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/5/2020 7:14:00 AM
Your descriptive lines are beautiful, Emile. "...carries dreams to the shores of forever, fueled by the elixir of hope and trust. Congratulations on your lovely poem.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2020 10:39:00 AM
Thank you Jenna, your words have touched my heart my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/5/2020 6:18:00 AM
Such a soothing romantic write Emile sir. Two souls immersed in each other like pools of still waters,~Each of lines are exciting:-) Congratulations on your win.Keep writing and keep inspiring us.Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2020 6:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Deepa, your kind words have touched my heart my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/4/2020 3:15:00 PM
Emile, you are an inspiration to everyone on here. When my heart is as free as yours, perhaps I will weave wonderment in a reader the way you do. Your Moonlit poem walks the gorgeous line of ethereal. Your depiction is majestic, brings hope to one.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2020 6:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Sigrid, I appreciate your comments and support your honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/4/2020 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this terrific poem, Emile:-) I really enjoyed it!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2020 6:20:00 AM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/4/2020 12:33:00 PM
Absolutely enchanting one my friend. This is brilliant. Congratulations on your win Emile! :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2020 6:19:00 AM
Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/4/2020 12:25:00 PM
- Really beautiful, Emile - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2020 6:18:00 AM
Thanks Sunshine, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/1/2020 1:08:00 PM
This is a wonderfully romantic write Emile, just what I expected, never a let down with your writing!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/1/2020 2:25:00 PM
Thanks so much John, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/1/2020 8:11:00 AM
A lovely write my friend...
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/1/2020 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Arturo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/1/2020 8:06:00 AM
I enjoyed this beautiful and romantic verse, Emile, best of luck in the contest. John
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/1/2020 8:18:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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