Undeniable

"Undeniable"
by:  Eric L. Boddie

The brightest star that ever reached our skys
Is pale in comparison to the light within those eyes
Youthful Beauty so pure and strong
With the softest brown placed exactly where it belongs
Every glance, however, does come at a cost
The windows to her Soul leave every observer lost
Something mesmerizing, something hypnotizing, something extreme, something rare
These are the reasons why it's so very hard not to stare
Heavenly Gems Perfectly Crafted By God's Hand
The Beauty within her eyes is too much for any to withstand
And there is absolutely nothing about her eyes that is less than desirable
Her eyes are truly The Work Of God, Simply Undeniable
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Roper Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 10:57 PM
Beautiful , Eric... the eyes to the soul of love :)
M. Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 4:48 PM
Wow! This is a true masterpiece my friend. I wonder? Who do you write about? She is captivating. A perfect 10! Thank you for sharing. Take care. Be blessed. ~Jennifer =refinnej
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September 14, 2015 at 10:16 PM
I write about so many different women....Beauty can be found in the most surprising places....this here however was written about a forbidden inspiration....meaning it is about my lil cousins friend....she has the most Beautiful eyes....but of course I told him I was gonna write this before I did....lol
Inman Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 1:42 PM
Great write. Enjoyed it very much.
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 1:29 PM
thank you james....it pleases me that a talent like yours feels this....
La France Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 3:03 PM
Eric, beautifully penned poem with many wonderful lines A7 and thanks for visiting my hushed pen poem
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 1:25 PM
thank you bw....I was Blessed to have had this inspiration....;)
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