Undefined You

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What more are you
Than a girl who has no friends
Someone who attends school everyday
Only to think about her grades
And gets tired of being who she is
But isn't good at changing any of this
What more are you
Than a girl who writes poems
And dreams of loving someone
But only cries in her bed
And yells at her family because she's sad
What more are you
Than a girl with no bling
No beauty for people to see
And you don't like wasting people's time
So you only stay inside
What more are you
Than a girl who is a girl
But isn't recognized for being yourself
You aren't anymore than a girl
What more are you 
Than a girl
With no love
And no voice
Just a person of cons
And trusts
All the wrongs 
So what more are you
Than this Girl
Who you purely are
Deep inside
What are you hiding
From the world
Who doesn't care
To know what
Your heart provides
What more are you
Than the other girl
What more are you
Than another girl
What more are you
Than a quiet girl
What more are you
Than a tired girl
What more are you
Than you
What more
Are you

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Date: 8/2/2016 1:39:00 PM
Harmony, good one...Linda
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Harmony Raymond
Date: 8/2/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thank you, truly!
Date: 8/2/2016 8:06:00 AM
You like all human beings are precious not only to your parents and family; but to your Heavenly Father. He has a plan: investigate. We all get down on ourselves at times; there's a bright tomorrow out there waiting for discovery.
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Harmony Raymond
Date: 8/2/2016 2:49:00 PM
What a spectacular thing to say, Poteet. Thank you. I appreciate your comment.
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