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UNDEFEATED

When I was a tot I ran a lot with bare feet When I was a girl I'd twirl steps on repeat Discovering high heels and thrills of my teens As I age I kneel to pray with feet under me counting toes of babe we hope not slow or delay faith undefeated

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Date: 3/2/2024 3:51:00 PM
This exquisite piece of verse evokes profound nostalgia, beautifully woven with vivid imagery that demonstrates your meticulous contemplation.
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/2/2024 5:10:00 PM
I appreciate your kind comments Sotto! Thanks
Date: 3/2/2024 2:45:00 PM
You go girl! Hope your weekend is pleasant Karen
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/2/2024 2:46:00 PM
Thanks Tom! Hugs have a fabulous weekend!

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