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Undead Boogie

She asks "May I dance with you, sweet Dracula
I really enjoy your Transylvania Twist
Perhaps later on a sexy slow dance
I'll happily expose neck and wrist

I love that red cape flows with ease
While others stare with jealous eyes
The undead boogie is such a treat
It makes me feel weak in my thighs

Your eyes are very hypnotic 
I have not one thought for another
Yes my blood has begun to turn cold
Still you make this heart feel a flutter 

When the evening is done don't fly away
I'll gladly accompany you to your crypt
Just one more time around the dance floor
Wait! Is that my blood I see on your lip?"

For the May I Dance With You Halloween Contest sponsored by Galen DS.

Note: "Transylvania Twist" is from the song Monster Mash.

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Wendy Rycroft Date: 10/31/2016 12:01:00 PM Congrats well-done great poem x Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/3/2016 3:17:00 PM Thanks Wendy.

Len Gasun Date: 10/31/2016 11:20:00 AM Congratulations on your amazing Halloween Poem and win my dear friend, Richard. Thank you for your participation and support in my contest. Hugs! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/30/2016 6:19:00 PM This is awesome Halloween fun, RIchard. Glad to find this one the night before Halloween!! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/31/2016 8:51:00 AM Thanks Andrea.;0)

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/21/2016 11:41:00 PM OH DEAR!!! This was...morbidly entertaining! :) Good luck in the contest, dear. It does make one think how often we flirt with evil...and think we can get away with it. Hugs Login to Reply

Samiha Zubair Date: 10/21/2016 12:54:00 AM A beautiful light write. Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/20/2016 2:35:00 PM This will place high I so believe...I loved it...And cant stop smiling at the imagery Im placing on qmy mind.: ) Login to Reply

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 10/19/2016 4:41:00 PM Very funny poem, Richard. I guess that was a rave from the grave party. Ha ha ha. Ty for the laughs. Love always to you and yours. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/20/2016 9:10:00 AM Thanks again Freddie.

Anna-Marie Docherty Date: 10/19/2016 11:42:00 AM A good fun piece that made me smile. Good luck for the contest! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/19/2016 12:09:00 PM Thanks Anna-Marie Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/19/2016 12:08:00 PM Thanks Scott

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 10/19/2016 6:58:00 AM Great words my friend. My smile stretches from ear to ear. Best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/19/2016 7:50:00 AM Thanks Scott

Mama Bear Date: 10/18/2016 6:47:00 AM Good to see you dancing to the Pumpkin Cha Cha Hope you win the contest Hugs Mom Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/18/2016 7:05:00 PM Thanks mom, love ya.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/17/2016 3:20:00 AM You made it appear so fun dear , Richard that made me think that you perhaps.. .Oh no, it could never be! Haha! Enjoyed it my friend! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/17/2016 7:58:00 AM Thanks Demetrios, I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

Viv Wigley Date: 10/17/2016 12:24:00 AM Never dance cheek to cheek with a Vampire, eh, Richard? Fun write, good luck in the contest. Regards, Viv Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/17/2016 7:58:00 AM Thanks Viv.

Arthur Vaso Date: 10/16/2016 9:49:00 PM Well done, for some reason I have the song Monster Mash in my head!!! :) Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/16/2016 11:12:00 PM I checked the Lyrics and they used the Transylvania Twist. No wonder my poem reminded you of the song.

Sarita Milliner Date: 10/16/2016 8:35:00 PM Very intriguing! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/16/2016 11:12:00 PM Thanks Sarita.

Daniel Turner Date: 10/16/2016 6:35:00 PM He did the mash! Fun read, Richard. You might want to wipe that blood from your lip:) Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/16/2016 7:32:00 PM "They call me the Count because I like to count." Thanks for the visit Daniel.

Paloma P Date: 10/16/2016 6:07:00 PM Entertaining read, who gets to lead when you're dancing the undead boogie? :) Bloody good. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/16/2016 7:33:00 PM Thanks Paloma.

Casarah Nance Date: 10/16/2016 5:26:00 PM I love it! Oh course Halloween is my fave...when I fit in the most, and think I might try a go at your transylvania twist. Nice write Rick :) Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/16/2016 7:34:00 PM I had fun writing this little ditty. Thanks Casarah.