Richard Lamoureux Poet Rhyme

Undead Boogie

She asks "May I dance with you, sweet Dracula
I really enjoy your Transylvania Twist
Perhaps later on a sexy slow dance
I'll happily expose neck and wrist

I love that red cape flows with ease
While others stare with jealous eyes
The undead boogie is such a treat
It makes me feel weak in my thighs

Your eyes are very hypnotic 
I have not one thought for another
Yes my blood has begun to turn cold
Still you make this heart feel a flutter 

When the evening is done don't fly away
I'll gladly accompany you to your crypt
Just one more time around the dance floor
Wait! Is that my blood I see on your lip?"

For the May I Dance With You Halloween Contest sponsored by Galen DS.

Note: "Transylvania Twist" is from the song Monster Mash.

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Wendy Rycroft October 31, 2016 at 12:01 PM Congrats well-done great poem x Richard Lamoureux November 3, 2016 at 3:17 PM Thanks Wendy.

Len Gasun October 31, 2016 at 11:20 AM Congratulations on your amazing Halloween Poem and win my dear friend, Richard. Thank you for your participation and support in my contest. Hugs!

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2016 at 6:19 PM This is awesome Halloween fun, RIchard. Glad to find this one the night before Halloween!! Richard Lamoureux October 31, 2016 at 8:51 AM Thanks Andrea.;0)

Eileen Manassian October 21, 2016 at 11:41 PM OH DEAR!!! This was...morbidly entertaining! :) Good luck in the contest, dear. It does make one think how often we flirt with evil...and think we can get away with it. Hugs

Samiha Zubair October 21, 2016 at 12:54 AM A beautiful light write.

Charmaine Chircop October 20, 2016 at 2:35 PM This will place high I so believe...I loved it...And cant stop smiling at the imagery Im placing on qmy mind.: )

Freddie Robinson Jr. October 19, 2016 at 4:41 PM Very funny poem, Richard. I guess that was a rave from the grave party. Ha ha ha. Ty for the laughs. Love always to you and yours. Richard Lamoureux October 20, 2016 at 9:10 AM Thanks again Freddie.

Anna-Marie Docherty October 19, 2016 at 11:42 AM A good fun piece that made me smile. Good luck for the contest! Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2016 at 12:09 PM Thanks Anna-Marie Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2016 at 12:08 PM Thanks Scott

Scott Thirtyseven October 19, 2016 at 6:58 AM Great words my friend. My smile stretches from ear to ear. Best of luck in the contest. Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2016 at 7:50 AM Thanks Scott

Mama Bear October 18, 2016 at 6:47 AM Good to see you dancing to the Pumpkin Cha Cha Hope you win the contest Hugs Mom Richard Lamoureux October 18, 2016 at 7:05 PM Thanks mom, love ya.

Demetrios Trifiatis October 17, 2016 at 3:20 AM You made it appear so fun dear , Richard that made me think that you perhaps.. .Oh no, it could never be! Haha! Enjoyed it my friend! Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2016 at 7:58 AM Thanks Demetrios, I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

Viv Wigley October 17, 2016 at 12:24 AM Never dance cheek to cheek with a Vampire, eh, Richard? Fun write, good luck in the contest. Regards, Viv Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2016 at 7:58 AM Thanks Viv.

Arthur Vaso October 16, 2016 at 9:49 PM Well done, for some reason I have the song Monster Mash in my head!!! :) Richard Lamoureux October 16, 2016 at 11:12 PM I checked the Lyrics and they used the Transylvania Twist. No wonder my poem reminded you of the song.

Sarita Milliner October 16, 2016 at 8:35 PM Very intriguing! Richard Lamoureux October 16, 2016 at 11:12 PM Thanks Sarita.

Daniel Turner October 16, 2016 at 6:35 PM He did the mash! Fun read, Richard. You might want to wipe that blood from your lip:) Richard Lamoureux October 16, 2016 at 7:32 PM "They call me the Count because I like to count." Thanks for the visit Daniel.

Paloma P October 16, 2016 at 6:07 PM Entertaining read, who gets to lead when you're dancing the undead boogie? :) Bloody good. Richard Lamoureux October 16, 2016 at 7:33 PM Thanks Paloma.

Casarah Nance October 16, 2016 at 5:26 PM I love it! Oh course Halloween is my fave...when I fit in the most, and think I might try a go at your transylvania twist. Nice write Rick :) Richard Lamoureux October 16, 2016 at 7:34 PM I had fun writing this little ditty. Thanks Casarah.