Justin Bordner Poet Free verse

Undamaged Devotion -

Half eaten hearts
pump on three surviving parts,
Loyalty, Lust, and Longing,
thump thump thump,

I was your secret crush
you were my finest rush,
put Poetry in my veins like victory ongoing,
placed your loneliness in a casket of flames,
our language so lustful, demolishing civilized chains,
touching so trustful that asking permission would be aweful,
team work more natural than rhythm to rhyme, a new breed of Angel,
clutching uncharted romance rough & rude we jump,

Strange how we sew, rip and stich the fabric of our worlds,
I can see your constellation in my dreams Luv,
a glimmer for every kiss you clamped on my confident lips,
I told you that my love can be the richest food on earth,
I understand now, that your love is stronger than diamonds,
I already miss you more than my heart can count,
my tears do not fall, suspended in the lock of a love saga,

Lets split the loot babe,
parchments & prizes of Love's plunder we'll divide fairly,
raise up anchors from Passion's Port,
slap and smother each other one more time,
blow on pearls together,
throwing them in this tempestuous sea for Luck,
breathing honest devotion in your ear,
whenever you need me I'll be there,
flag flying fast to you, cannons cursing for your care,
your final stare, the softest I've ever seen  -

J.A.B.

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Eileen Manassian October 29, 2014 at 11:58 AM I miss you more than my heart can count....what a sweet line for the woman you miss who has inspired this ravishing piece.

Jay Loveless April 20, 2014 at 5:50 PM Im caught up in the rush of your words, the feeling is intense in them. Justin Bordner April 21, 2014 at 8:32 PM I like it when you get caught up in my work. Intensity is something I was born to chanel. I revel in the last line most. J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A March 26, 2014 at 12:37 AM Hi Justin, reading this one again. I like the high feeling of your words. A future A LOVE SAGA--- A fine rush, from your crystal lite pen. Thank you so much for the words on my page. xox~ Linda Justin Bordner March 26, 2014 at 1:19 AM Intense words for intense feelings, epic adventure for epic love. Happy you enjoy this saga Linda. Thanks for being Awesome my Sphinx. J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2014 at 5:05 AM - A fantastic well written poem, Justin !! - which I liked very much. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Justin Bordner March 25, 2014 at 2:01 PM Adventure on the high seas of Passion is always fantastic, thanks Anne. J.A.B.

Sandy Ivy D March 22, 2014 at 9:24 PM Lovely, words. I feel the yumm-yumm-ness of this crush. Sandyivy Justin Bordner March 23, 2014 at 1:12 AM Extremes are so very yummy Sandy, makes life rewarding. Thanks for visiting. J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 22, 2014 at 3:11 PM "our language so lustful, demolishing civilized chains.." wooooooooosh!!!!!! such words.. :) heart moving.. and mind bugging.. :D Justin Bordner March 23, 2014 at 1:09 AM Wooosh is righ Olive, we have unrestricted expression! Her state and smile can warm a winter day. Glad you enjoy the saga. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian March 20, 2014 at 8:40 PM Not only are your writes...intriguing, but so are you responses to posts! :) Wow. I would go and tell you which lines moved me...but I see some others have beat me to it! This is just so rich...every line, a treasure. Unusual grouping of words at times...yet, that's what makes it catching....cannons cursing for your care...Dividing of loot...Intriguing. Good one, Justin. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Justin Bordner March 21, 2014 at 8:52 PM Glad you noticed the word pairings Eileen, good eye. I love engineering words intricately to express my deepest feelings. In a certain sense the words are my soul's laborers, but only because I believe in the spirit of the words themselves, a partnetship of sorts. The loot of Love's plunder, garunteed to be intriguing!Thanks so much. J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 20, 2014 at 3:55 PM "our language so lustful, demolishing civilized chains..." A STANDING OVATION!!!!! :D you got my eyes glued on this prose, powerful! and "lovingly".... :) THAnk you for dropping by and reading some of my writings.. :) God bless you more..... ====== olive_eloi with smiles!!! Justin Bordner March 21, 2014 at 8:45 PM Always happy, and feeling successful when others areinspired by the life I share with others Olive. Yeah, we've got xool communication for sure. Thanks for the warm comments. J.A.B.

Skat A March 20, 2014 at 1:23 AM WOOOW! How much loot are you talking about. Ha-ha. Kidding. J A B, This kind of devotion is the most incredible feeling. Giving and receiving love, this has been a pleasure to read. You are The Ink Master, beautiful sentiments sincere and sweetly penned:-) ~SKAT~ Justin Bordner March 20, 2014 at 1:52 AM Enough loot to feed the world with Skat! Incredible from top to bottom! Your sweetness to me is a candy worth a thousand mmmmmssssss...thank you. J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2014 at 10:57 PM Loyalty, Lust, and Longing, and the beat goes on... Thump thump thump, Justin, you eat and write from the finest. With the richness no other can compare to. A crush, and a rush, what more could these two hearts want. You end the poem, well. You know what they say, diamonds are forever! After reading the line above. --Love is stronger than diamonds-- I like the meaning of this and how it goes past a connotation of going beyond time. This is a beautiful write, flags flying high. xox~ LINDA Justin Bordner March 20, 2014 at 2:06 AM Indeed I do my Sphinx! My Luv is a most unusual woman; we have a harmony of the highest hunger. Her diamond was discovered in the smoldering mines of my heart, the biggest and most shimmering ever found therein, priceless. J.A.B.

Teresa Godwin March 19, 2014 at 8:50 AM This is amazing. Can almost feel rushing winds of a roaring ocean and, softly fall in submission to nature's decree.. rest. ~Teresa Justin Bordner March 19, 2014 at 12:34 PM Yes, to rest on the calm air of love fair. Partners in a paradise of play, recounting they're treasures, saying goodbye, but not saying never again. Thank you Teresa. J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal March 19, 2014 at 12:44 AM This poem blew me away, Justin... amazing piece with such raw honesty and love. That's where the words should rest--straight from the heart and into the light and eyes of others. There are too many memorable lines for me to choose from.. <3 Always, Laura Justin Bordner March 19, 2014 at 12:23 PM Raw honesty and love is what was given, no regrets, the roots grow deep, and wiil not die, and the Future remains open. Your words comfort me Laura, reassuring me that my style is true. J.A.B.